Chapter Concept - Pan's Labyrinth

Update 7/25: Massive update to all The Second Task map sub-sections and QoL changes to the entire main post, reflecting current notes. My goal is now to begin drafting concepts for a Survivor and addressing concerns brought up in the comments. Thanks for the support!~

Hello, and welcome to the post detailing my new licensed chapter concept, "Pan's Labyrinth"!

This concept currently includes 1 Killer, The Pale Man, and 1 Map, The Second Task. I might, later on, introduce concepts regarding add-ons and perhaps even a Survivor!

Apologies if the formatting is messy, this is my first serious forum post in quite some time. This is a long post. I was able to make a TL;DR for the map section, though, so if you're in a rush, you can just read that for the gist of it!

If you enjoy reading this or have balance concerns, please reach out to me in the comments! I'd love to refine this concept until it reaches a point that would be enjoyable for both Killer and Survivor mains if it were present in the game. I hope you enjoy it!

New Killer - The Pale Man

The Pale Man is an enticing Killer, using the grandeur of his feast to gain control over his victims and quickly overwhelm them.

The Pale Man's Power is Gluttonous Banquet.

Survivors are affected by a new Killer-specific Status Effect, Starvation, for the Trial. There are 4 tiers of Starvation, each taking 45 seconds to proc while not in chase, hooked, or downed. Survivors experiencing Starvation 3 - 4 are visible via Survivor Portraits for both roles.

• Starvation 1 does not inflict penalties.
• Starvation 2 reduces vaulting and pallet throw speeds by 15%. Survivors cannot stack healing speed increases, and Survivor self-healing speeds are capped at 75%.
• (All Starvation tiers henceforth inflict a further -5% to vault and pallet throw speeds.)
• Starvation 3 inflicts Exhaustion and Broken. Survivors make noises as if they are Injured. Solo repair speeds are reduced by 10% (cooperative repairing is unaffected).
• Starvation 4 can only be reached via Tempting Glare. After reaching Starvation 4, the Survivor receives -10% to all solo action speeds, stacking with previous penalties besides vaulting speeds. If the Survivor was Healthy, they are Injured, receiving the on-hit speed boost.

The Pale Man introduces a new Interactable: Pillars of Fruit. Survivors can see the aura of the nearest Pillar of Fruit. Interacting with a Pillar of Fruit fully resets their Starvation and prevents Starvation progression for 20 seconds, at the cost of triggering a loud noise notification at the structure's location and empowering Tempting Glare.

• For every Survivor at the start of The Trial, 2 Pillars of Fruit spawn.
• The Interact duration lasts the same as Invitation Pillars from the Twisted Masquerade event.

After being unhooked, Survivors do not experience the effects of or progress their Starvation tier for 15 seconds or until they perform a Conspicuous Action.

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The Pale Man's Special Ability is Tempting Glare.

The Pale Man may press the Special Attack button to initiate Tempting Glare.

• While activating or deactivating Tempting Glare, The Pale Man moves at the slowest movement speed of the two stances.
• Activation time is around the same time as Onryo's Manifest.
• There is no cooldown for swapping stances outside of the activation time.

While in Tempting Glare:

• The Pale Man moves at a reduced movement speed of 110% and cannot use basic or lunge attacks.
• Starvation progression is enabled for Survivors in a chase.
• Survivors within line-of-sight and 16m are affected by Tempting Glare, and receive accelerated Starvation progression by 370%. This progression increase is evenly distributed to each Survivor currently affected.
• Progression to Starvation 4 is considered unique, with Tempting Glare only unlocking it. It takes 4 seconds to progress from Starvation 3 to Starvation 4.
• Survivors affected by Tempting Glare are highlighted to you based on their Starvation tier: white for 1 - 2, yellow for 3, and red for 4. This updates dynamically as Starvation accumulates on them.
• You can see the auras of Survivors in Starvation 3 - 4 further than 16m from you. These auras are red, regardless of the Survivor's tier.
• Being blinded or picking up a Survivor reverts you to your default stance automatically.

Whenever a Survivor interacts with a Pillar of Fruit, Tempting Glare receives an increased movement speed of +15% for 4 seconds, the duration being stackable.

• The amount of time remaining is visible via the Power Gauge and only ticks down while actively using Tempting Glare.
• You receive +1 second for every Survivor in Starvation 4 at the time of interaction, for a maximum of +8 seconds from a single interaction.

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The Pale Man's Perks:

Table for One - Your feast is for you and you alone.

• After kicking a generator, the Survivor who has spent the most time repairing the Generator screams, revealing their location.
• Table for One has a cooldown of 30 seconds.

Indulgence - The real nourishment of the banquet comes from the fatal mistakes of your prey.

• Whenever 2 or more Survivors are within 16m of you, Indulgence activates.
• Any Survivors within your Terror Radius are Incapacitated for 8/10/12 seconds.
• If a Survivor is hit within 15 seconds of Indulgence's activation, that Survivor receives Hindered (-6%) for 1.8 seconds.
• When either the Incapacitated effect expires or a Survivor is hit, Indulgence deactivates and has a minimum cooldown of 40 seconds.

One Flesh - Your tenacity interferes with the Survivor's aura-reading abilities, almost masking your inhumanity.

• If a Survivor were to detect your aura without the use of an item, you gain Undetectable for the duration of the aura-reading effect.
• If a Survivor is performing a cooperative action with other Survivors, all aura-reading effects for those Survivors are nullified for One Flesh's duration.
• One Flesh has a cooldown of 40/30/20 seconds, beginning after the aura-reading effect ends.

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New Map - The Second Task

The Second Task was a test gifted to a young princess to prove her obedience and innocence. It now serves as the lair of The Pale Man, who litters the floors with the clothes of those who failed and boasts a grand banquet to draw even more to the same fate.

Basic Detail - The Second Task is an "indoor map", but has significant differences from maps such as Gideon Meat Plant and Lery's Memorial Institute. It is a single-floor map around 142sqT that does not feature many complete walls, but the terrain is littered with small elevation changes (such as the dips in Eyrie of Crows) and has a ceiling comparable in height to Gideon Meat Plant's lower floor, emphasizing a feeling of claustrophobia.

Tiles and Loops - The general objects that can be found are mounds of clothes, sculptures, and crates that make up tiles, alongside broken-off pieces of wood and brick. Most tiles are of a middling height, with dips in elevation that favor mind-games. Tiles are small and window-based, forcing chases across the map. Changes in elevation are high enough to cause staggering, making running forward significantly riskier. Due to this, the chase potential is considerably weaker on the Survivor end as there is little room for error, and even perks like Lithe and Balanced Landing do not grant immediate ends to a chase due to the crags forcing a Survivor left or right. Pallets are seldom. As a result, it is overall a killer-sided map where anti-loop killers such as Clown benefit compared to map-control Killers like Huntress or Blight.

Detail - The primary color is a dull orange/brown, and the location itself appears to be a once-lavish palace. However, one cannot shake the uncertainty caused by the long-abandoned interior, crumbling in ruin. The walls seem to almost glow with a malevolence, giving the torches on the pillars and flickering chandeliers above generators substantial competition. That is, where the walls don't feature rich retellings of a malnourished, inhuman being feasting on innocents. Pillars are scattered around the map, giving structure to the complex twists of the cave and hosting a much-needed place to hide for anyone trapped in what feels more like a tomb than a palace.

Structures - In one of the few pockets of the ruin, a feast is laid out across a lavish table, a single chair heading the impossibly fresh display of food. A fireplace lies behind the chair, ever-burning as the ambient sounds of rocks chipping the floor grow ever closer. A Generator heads off the section between the table and wall. This area, The Feast, is the Primary Structure of the Map. Various secondary structures spawn within The Second Task to give landmarks on the map. This can be specific sculptures meticulously maintained, signs of a struggle present by knocked-over chairs, or other means. Exit Doors are marked with a long stretch of chalk around their borders, leading to a rainy, bleak forest that lies beyond. If one exit spawns near the primary structure, a mill can be seen in the far distance.

TL;DR Map - The Second Task is an indoor map that utilizes elevation and small, window-based loops to force Survivors to constantly make decisions in a chase. Elevation serves as both a boon and bane to both sides, hiding Totems and strengthening mind-games while offering Balanced Landing procs and areas to hide from sight, if only temporarily. It is overall a fairly Killer-sided map but is by no means more perilous for Survivors than Shelter Woods or Midwich due to its average size and a plentiful amount of windows.

(This is, by far, the least refined part of the concept, so I'd love to have feedback on this especially. It's an attempt to make an indoor map potentially fun for both sides.)

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And that's it for now! As I said much earlier, please let me know what you think! I'd like to see if this concept has potential, and all comments help in realizing it!