New chapter concept

Chapter name: Breath of The Wild

Realm: "The Trapper’s Hollow." Snowy woodland with a decrepit hunting shack.

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The Killer

Full name: Hank D Richardson

In-game nickname: The Poacher

Age: 31

Gender: male

Nationality: American

Place of birth: Rugby, ND

Year of birth: April 17th, 1921

Clothing: black boots, jeans, belt, tucked plaid shirt, worn brown overcoat, black gloves, burlap sack over his head with 2 small holes for seeing through, brown Gatsby cap

Weapon: A skinning knife

Power: Double Barrel Precision

Speed: 4.4 m/s

Terror Radius: 32m

Height: Tall

Power Description: Fires a cone-shaped shotgun blast up to 12 meters, dealing 1 health state of damage. Holds 2 shots before a 6 second reload after both are spent. Missing a shot reveals his location within 32m. And to make it fair the recoil of each shot has a 1.5 second animation as a cool down

Ammunition: There is shotgun shells in lockers, but each locker holds 4. You start out with 4 shells too

Animation after hitting a survivor: Does a quick two side wipe on his sleeve

Common add-ons: Worn Sling, slightly decreases reload time by 0.2s. Dull Shells, moderately increases spread range but decreases accuracy.

Uncommon add-ons: Polished Stock, slightly reduces cooldown after firing. Buckshot Pellets, moderately widens pellet spread, making it easier to hit at close range but less effective at distance.

Rare add-ons: Engraved Barrel, lightly increases movement speed while aiming. Silencer, does not show your aura to survivors when you miss your shot.

Very rare add-ons: Custom Cartridges, survivors hit at max range suffer from Mangled for 20 seconds. Bone Charm, firing the shotgun within 0-8 meters decreases survivor movement speed by 20% for 15 seconds

Ultra rare add-ons: Father’s Compass, survivors hit by a shotgun blast are revealed to Hank for 4 seconds. If downed, their aura is revealed for 8 seconds.

Unique perk 1: Territorial Instinct, damaging a generator within 8 meters of a Hooked Survivor highlights all nearby Survivors for 4 seconds. Tiers: 6, 8, 10 meters.

Unique perk 2: Eagle eye, survivors scratch marks are visible for an extra 4 seconds. Tiers: 4, 8, 12 seconds.

Unique perk no 3: Predator's Patience, if you do not hit a survivor for 20 seconds after you downed a survivor, you gain a 3% haste status until you hit/down another survivor. Tiers: 3, 6, 9%.

Difficulty: Intermediate

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The Survivor

Name: Mara Jensen

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Occupation: Wildlife Conservation Officer

Nationality: American

Place of Birth: Sioux Falls, SD

Date of birth: September 1st, 1929

Appearance: Light brown skin, brown eyes, black hair

Clothing: Olive-green ranger jacket, dark hiking pants, boots, utility belt.

Unique perk no 1: Survivor's Instinct, when within 16, 18, 20 meters of the Killer, their aura is briefly revealed to you for 3 seconds. Triggers once every 30, 25, 20 seconds.

Unique perk no 2: Field Dressing, When healing a Survivor, gain a 6% haste effect for 4 seconds after completing the heal. Stacks with other movement speed bonuses.

Unique perk no 3: Silent Step, after vaulting a window or dropping a pallet, suppress scratch marks for 2, 3, 4 seconds.

(And just for context, my killer doesn't pull the shotgun out of his ass when he aims. From a survivor's POV he holds the shotgun in the left hand and holds his weapon in the right. And in the killers pov it's kinda like Bubba but instead of a chainsaw it's the shotgun barrel. And I was too lazy to make lore for the two, sorry guys😭.)

So tell me, is this a good concept? Or is this just a rip-off of huntress and/or deathslinger.