Killer idea: Manbearpig
Name: Manbearpig
Lore: one third man, one third bear and one third pig.
Height: Tall
Speed: 4.4
Terror radius: 36m
Weapon: Right claw
Powers;
1- Cross species: Man, is smart enough to trap all chests at the beggining of the trial. This is instant and automatic. When someone use a trap chest they will be blinded for 10s and reveal their location to the killer for 3s.
Bear, after the first chase (succesful or not) the Manbearpig will gain the ability to smell his prey when it is around a 26m radius and not in a chase. It will creat an audio and visual notification to the killer for 3s.
Pig, can enter a state of frenzy increasing his speed but also strenght. This will increase his speed by 10% for 10s and try to hit anything close enough. The ability then goes on cd for 10s.
2- Inhuman scream: The Manbearpig can howl causing survivors at least 40m away from him to scream. This will reveal their aura to the killer for 2s and is on a ressource gauge.
Perks;
1- Technology: The killer will get notified when survivors are working on a gen at least 120m/80m/40m away from them for 3s/4s/5s.
2- Devolution: Slightly/ Greatly/Tremendously increase the reduction penalty on missed skillchecks but notifications to the killer have a 20s/15s/10s delay.
3- (Hex) 3 little pigs: 2/3 survivors will appear to be the obsession but only one really is. The real obsession can repair and heal 5%/7%/9% faster (can stack with other perks) but if the killer down the real obsession the aura of the two other survivors is revealed for 3s/4s/5s.
Just for fun don't take it seriously but I welcome criticism :p
Comments
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He's half bear, half man and half pig. I wish you put more effort into this mate because as a massive south park fan I would love to see this.
His ability isn't that strong and the first perk is too strong. The first perk is also the wrong way around, it seems to be stronger at tier 1 than tiers 2/3.
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Yeah it doesn't work the half half half thing bc it's literally a /3 of something not half xD
Btw I did put at least a whole 20 mins.
Those aren't tiers but rather the way his Powers work at all time.
Lemme rework and change a few things.
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Yea but his lore is half man, half bear, half pig. Creating a chapter that's only 20 mins is pointless, they are never that good. You can tell when someone doesn't spend time on a chapter.
Although I will say seeing ManBearPig as a chapter idea makes me want to give him a proper one.
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I think my idea, which isn't a chapter, is kinda nice.
Instead of bitching about it why don't you give suggestions ? Or better go do one yourself.
Beside I can write the lore I want so idk why your doing a nervous poop here.
Also, why do you even critic when you have written no chapter or any killer/survivor builds ideas ?
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Wow I must have hit a nerve xD the idea of a ManBearPig killer would be cool, but not one this short.
No matter what you say a chapter that you only spend 20 mins on will never be that good. It can have potential but it needs more than just a few random perks and a ability to make it work.
If you want suggestions I'll give you a few:
1. Hex: 3 Little Pigs isn't a great perk. Your giving one player an increased gen repair speed, which no one will run. And the aura is shown only when the obsession is downed therefore if they hide it is pointless. Also why is it a hex totem? This perk has no reason to be one.
2. Every perk needs tiers. Technology needs the numbers swapped around to make it better however it still is too strong for a Billy, Freddy, Demogorgan, Spirit or a Nurse.
3. Create perks that you would personally run yourself. If you don't think you would actually run it then there is no point in it.
4. Make sure the numbers are easy numbers for the dev team to work with. A 26m is just too awkward of a number to use. It should probably be 24m and his speed should be 4.6 since he will be too easily looped at 4.4.
I had taken a break from the forums for a while but I always did give people suggestions on how to improve their chapter for a very long time.
Also I have written my own chapters in the past, which just shows how new you are to the forums. I always spent a lot of time writing the lore, trying to balance the ability and perks and creating add-ons that complement the killers ability. If you click on my name you'll find them pretty easily.
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Terror radius and mechanics Works in 26m/32m/36m so no 24 would be an akward number not following their perk values chart.
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The hex three Little pigs does not show the real obsession aura but the other 2 fake obsessions and is made this way so you can keep your obsession for last and have less trouble finding the two last survivors. It would also be great to hide which ones are obsession when you are using such a perk.
It is a perk designed to facilitate end game or to rush 1 or 2 survivors. Think about it, the tactic should be obvious.
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The tiers are the distance reduction and I'm using the same distance has empathy. I agree I could add a timer tho to make it a bit harder to use.
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Lastly, of course I make perks that I would use. I can see tons of synergies here like technology, ruin and huntress lullaby.
Instead of assuming stuff like that I wouldn't use those perks or that there's no way to add them up together think about it for a few seconds.
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Lastly, you're not stroking a nerve. You are just being completly unhelpful whilst trying to seem knowledgable. Of the 5 "arguments" you made, only one was even just close to be a suggestion.
There's a difference between criticism and *constructive* criticism.
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Your confused mate. The Hag has a 24m terror radius, The Spirit has a 24m terror radius and The Pig was 28m. I think you meant 28m/32m/36m. He should never have a 36m terror radius since he is 4.4m/s.
No my point is correct mate. If I'm the real obsession and you don't find me the whole game then I have 9% gen increase with no down side. Also you didn't tell me why it should be a hex totem. The game tells survivors when they have an increase or decrease to repair or healing speed therefore meaning if I'm getting the increased speed I'll know I'm the real obsession.
If you want to make this perk work then remove the hex part and remove the speed bonus.
You don't mention anything about distance reduction for technology in the perk description. My point is simple I would rather have the tier 1 version of this perk than the tier 3 version so the tier order needs swapped. But the killers I mentioned before would be way too strong with this perk.
In it's current state Hex: 3 Little Pigs is not worth a slot. If fixed it maybe ok but right now it's pretty bad. Red ranks would be over the moon to see the killer running this since its makes the gens go even faster, they'll probably not destroy the totem. So if your telling me you'll run that perk once you get past green ranks then have fun with that. You won't be able to complain about gen speeds ever again.
Yea I'd run technology because it is broken at tier 1 lol it's more broken than old ds or mettle of man.
Why did you say lastly twice? I think I'm giving you more help than this chapter deserves. I've played this game since its release, been at rank 1 for pretty much the whole time so I'd say I'm pretty knowledgeable about this stuff. I told someone last night about the lore thing and they laughed their head off. They don't even watch south park which just proves my point even more.
Also you said why do I critic when I don't have a chapter. It's funny how that's the only thing you didn't reply to.
It's such a shame because when I saw a ManBearPig chapter I got so excited.. but then I saw his lore and just wanted to cry. It's annoying because you can see it so easily how you only spent 20 mins on this. The last chapter I wrote I spent months trying to get it to a place where I was happy with it.
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Dude I checked your profil and you never wrote any chapter. All you do is comment and write in the "feedback" section.
Also, if you do not like my idea feel free to leave and make your own. I'm done debating with you. You literally killed this post.
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wish i could read this but im in class. Will review later
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######### yes
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You didn't look then lol I'll leave now but enjoy your day and best of luck with the chapter ;)
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seems a little weak and the name is funny
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