New Killer. The Clone. New Survivor. Rhia Taylor. New Chapter. Cloned For The Better
Description.
Rhia Taylor was an ordinary baby that grew up to be a bit ugly. She was part of a rich family. One day, her mother (Cindey Taylor) took her out to have her hair cut. Rhia noticed that her mother had taken some of her hair. Later on Rhia challenged her mother as to why she did that. Then, Cindey took Rhia down into the basement where there was a laboratory. She took Rhia into a room with a human looking body under a blanket. She slowly started to uncover it and what Rhia saw would change her life forever! Her mother woke up the clone of Rhia and it went mental! It came at her mother with a long, gigantic needle with a bit of poison at the tip. The Clone then rested Cindey on a bed in a closed room in the Lab and covered her under a blanket. Rhia got away but all of a sudden, she couldn’t get through an invisible border that was keeping her in the Lab with her clone! The clone then put on a black, leather jacket. Put on a mask with no eye holes so that no one could see the ugly face she had underneath. She kept her red hair down, took the gigantic needle and went to hunt for her look a like.
New Killer. The Clone. Power.
Cloned. The Clone has a minion (The Minion looks like the Clone) that is also roaming around the map. When the Minion locates a survivor, that survivor’s aura is shown to the Clone for 5 seconds. (The survivor has to be visible to the minion in order to locate) The Minion has no Terror Radius. The Minion is also crouched down so it is harder for the survivor to see. The Clones terror radius can no longer be heard by the located survivor until the Clone gets within 8 metres. The Clones movement speed is increased by 25% for 30 seconds when a survivor is located.
Add ons.
The Minion now has the ability to hit the Survivor ONCE! Green addon
The Clone becomes obsessed with ONE survivor. When the Minion locates the obsession, the Clone has the ability to swap bodies with the Minion. Purple addon.
When the Minion locates a survivor, that survivor becomes exposed for 45 seconds. Pink addon
When the Minion locates a survivor, the survivors aura is visible for 3/4/5 seconds. Brown/yellow/green addon.
Perks.
Invisible Border
When within 12/14/16 metres from a survivor, an invisible border activates. (The survivor is oblivious to this) The survivor can no longer step out of range from the killer for 1 minute unless the killer steps out of range first. Once the survivor steps out of range after 1 minute. The killer will receive a notification. The invisible border has a cool down of 1 minute and 30 seconds.
‘You’re trapped in my presence!’ - The Clone
Generator Fake
The Killer can sabotage 1/2/3 non-repaired generators. If a survivor starts working on a sabotaged generator, the repair action will suddenly stop when it gets to 25%. Which will let the survivor know it is sabotaged. The Killer cannot kick the sabotaged generator before it hits 25%. When the sabotaged generator hits 25%, it cannot be repaired for 5/10/15 seconds. And will reset its progress to 0% for the survivors to then work on.
’Sike, that’s not real!’ - The Clone
Blood Border
The killer can place 4/5/6 Blood borders on either: Pallets, Generators, Chests, Totems or Exit Gates. When a survivor comes across a blood border, they will have to break it in order to start the action. To break a blood border, it will take 6 seconds. The killer can only place a Blood Border on 1 Exit Gate. To place a Blood Border, it will take 3 seconds.
’A Border made from man, literally.’ - The Clone
New Map, Cindey’s Laboratory.
New Survivor. Rhia Taylor
Appearance: Black and leather jacket, red hair, glasses, purple shirt underneath the jacket, black and leather jeans and black, small heels.
Perks:
Faulty Vault.
Whilst injured and the killer is within 8 metres, when vaulting through a WINDOW, the window will get blocked for both you and the killer for 10 seconds. Faulty Vault has a cooldown of 60/50/40 seconds.
’If I can’t go through it, you can’t!’ - Rhia Taylor
Hooked
Once you have sabotaged a hook, you can replace it with a fake. Once the killer tries to place a survivor on the hook, it will immediately drop and will replace with a new hook within 20 seconds. The survivors wiggle bar will be paused for 6/5/4 seconds after trying to be hooked. The survivor can place 2 hooks. Every survivor can see the fake hook.
’Haha, it broke as if it was fake!’ - Rhia Taylor
Stun Reaction
Whilst getting unhooked, if the killer is standing within 4/6/8 metres from you, the killer will get stunned for 3 seconds. (No other survivors benefit from this)
’F#ck!ng camper, play like a man!’ - Rhia Taylor
Please let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcome! 😊 I’m sorry if any of Rhia’s perks already exist. I can’t keep track of the perks nowadays and it’s really hard to think of some. 😂 just tell me if I have copied some perks that already exist! Thank you.
Comments
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Honestly the ability isn't that strong. Once he finds a survivor (which might not matter if they are on the other side of the map) he still has to still down them. Finding a survivor isn't really what the killer cares about anymore. They need some sort of gen pressure and chase mechanic. The add-ons are interesting but not enough to make him viable.
Invisible Border: I have no idea what to think of this lol I can't tell if it's really weak or strong. Wish I could give you feedback but I don't know what.
Generator Fake: I like this but I think half way is too far. Lower it to 25% and maybe add the condition the killer can't kick the generator. At least it gives the survivors a bit of feedback as to whether a gen may be fake or not.
Blood Border: It would need a couple of seconds set up (maybe 3/4/5 seconds) so the survivor can have time to move away from the pallet that the killer uses it on. If the killer could add it to pallets really quickly mid chase it would be op.
Hope this feedback was helpful, I tried to explain why i think the ability is too weak by itself and give good feedback on the perks.
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Thank you so much for the feedback. And yes. I can make some changes. I will make them later tho as I’m in a DBD match. Lol. 😂
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I have tweaked the ability a little bit making the survivor def until they get hit. I have also made it so the killers movement speed is 25% quicker for 30 seconds when a survivor is located making it easier to travel around the Map to get them. I have also messed around with the perks. And please could I get feedback on Rhia Taylor. Thank you. 😊
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Ok I've re-read the ability and you've buffed it a little too far lol being oblivious until your hit is a bit much. 30 seconds of being oblivious is probably enough. The killers speed boost should only last till he begins a chase. 25% speed increase during chases would be way too op and survivors would have no chance. I'd lastly say increase the aura to maybe 6 or 8 seconds that way you see the survivor for a short period while making your way over.
Faulty Vault: There are two issues with this. Firstly 3 metres is extremely short, the killer would probably down you during that vault if it was that short. 8 metres is probably a better number. Secondly why would the entity help the survivor and block of that window? If the survivor also can't vault this window then that would be good.
Hooked: I would lower the fake hook number to one. A 4 man swf could bully killers easily with this otherwise. Allow the aura of the fake hook to be shown to all survivors to compensate for this. It'll then help solo players as well as teams.
Stun Reaction: So you need to be the survivor getting unhooked? Also I like the idea behind this but I don't think it's fair. Camping is a big problem with this game but a swf team could bully killers extremely easily with this. I don't really know what feedback to give since stuns are extremely hard to balance, especially when unhooking.
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Thank you for responding. When it comes to metres. I’m not very smart. 😂. I have nerfed the perks and hopefully they are not as OP as they were before. Thanks. 👍🏻
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The ability of the Killer does almost nothing, its a decent tracking ability but he needs something fro chases otherwise the killer ends up like legion xD
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Thank you for responding. I don’t really see how this power is almost like the Legions. The Legions power is probably one of the most useless powers there is. Disagree with me if u like. The Clones power is more like having speed to get to the survivor without them really knowing as they are def until the Clone is within range. The Clone has no cool down after this and she can’t vault over windows or pallets either. Also, the legion also has to find the survivor themselves whereas the Clone almost knows exactly where they are, and the Addons improve the ability. 👍🏻. Thank you for responding though. Also, what would you suggest about the ability for chasing survivors?
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To fit the theme of the Killer, maybe make it able to let spawn another clone at a certain area infront of you at some range. It needs abit time to build up like 2 seconds and it can bodyblock to prevent using pallets or windows.
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