Chapter Concept: Deepest Desires
Reminder: All of this is just a concept and i'm open to constructive criticism and ideas, thank you!
Chapter's Realm: Despised City-Block
Map: Pierced Pleasure-house
Description: A warped recreation of the city block The Mistress worked before she was consumed by the Entity. The torn-down brothel know as "Lady Midnight" stands in one of the corners of the map (Size and inner room arrangement similar to Disturbed Ward's main building but a little smaller and square); 1 2-story apartment building (Similar to Badham's Preschool's House) and another similar to it but with the second floor missing (Maybe an area to have a random-debris loop or not be acessible); A road cuts the map in half, graffiti on the building walls and street with old and broken police vehicles parked; The killer shack is present and usually stays a bit distant from the main building; There is at least one alley between 2 buildings (There's one pallet and a window that leads inside one of the buildings); In the open areas, rubble makes-up the loops (Much like in Crotus Penn).
Killer's Lore:
Trigger Warning: R*pe, Abuse, Police Brutality
I haven't thought too much about this yet and I'm accepting suggestions, here is what I came up with until now. Kiara White was the owner and one of the most requested ladies of a successful brothel in downtown Chicago known as Lady Midnight. She served many with care and attention, and she enjoyed any kind of play they asked of her, if payed accordingly.
One of these customer's wasn't so keen on doing things nicely though. Jason Baker was a cop and abused his authority and power to subdue and abuse Lara multiple times. During one of these sessions though, she managed to struggle out of his grasp and get his gun, shooting his kneecaps and subduing him.
That night Kiara tasted pleasure, but not physical, the pleasure to torture such a wicked soul, one who tormented her for so long, and promptly finish him with her own hands. Unfortunately for her it didn't take long for his wife and co-workers to discover what had happened to Jason. In the following week, a dozen police officers stormed the building shooting anyone on sight, leaving nothing but torn curtains and dead bodies in their wake.
Kiara, crying locked up in her room, held a gun to her head, waiting to finish it all once they enter the room, and as she pulled the trigger, what she felt wasn't pain nor peace, but a calling. She felt an opportunity to repay torment with torment, and to feel pleasure while at it, knowking nothing else in this life she accepted, leaving nothing for the police to find when entering the room that night.
Weapon: Piercing Nails
In her attack animation, The Mistress slightly curls her fingers to have her nails go towards the survivor and stretches her arm foward. On a successful hit, she licks her index finger.
Terror Radius:
The Mistress has a standard Terror Radius of 32 meters (Music concept pending)
Height and Speed:
The Mistress is a Tall killer, similar to The Plague, she was once human, but now the twisted powers of the entity make her a Succubus like character in appearance and attitude. She moves at 4,4m/s (110%)
Appearance:
Little of her humanoid appearance remains, The Mistress is female and plus-size, but her skin resembles stitched black leather (Think Catwoman from Batman Returns) with bits of skin showing through, her face is a contorted visage with a demonic grin covering almost the whole left-side of her face, sunken red glowing eyes, small muscular wings and a forked tail.
Ability: Seduction & Submission
Power Info and Stats:
- Both Seductive Kiss and Whip Attack have a maximum range of 32 meters.
- The Seductive Kiss has a charge time of 1 second to reach full range.
- The Seductive Kiss' projectile speed is 40m/s
- The Seductive Kiss' projectile size is similar to that of The Deathslinger's Speargun shot but bigger.
- While charging Seductive Kiss, The Mistress has a tremendously decreased Movement speed (3.08m/s).
- The Seductive Kiss can be cancelled by pressing the M1 button.
- The animation for Seductive Kiss has The Mistress' bring her fingers to her lips and lean forward when releasing it.
- If The Mistress misses a Seductive Kiss she enters an furious state for 2 seconds (similar to Nurse's Fatigue, moving at 20% her Movement speed)
- The Whip Attack cannot go through terrain but it can go vertically, over pallets and through windows. (It is always automatically aimed at the charmed Survivor's direction)
- The Mistress must be facing the charmed Survivor, not be blinded or stunned to perform this attack.
- This attack has a post-hit animation where she pulls back the whip (Same cool-down as a Basic Attack)
- The Mistress' Lustful Dash makes her move at 6m/s (150%)
- While dashing The Mistress cannot attack, much Spirit and Wraith when using their abilities.
- This ability has a visual queue, when on cool-down her wings are closed behind her back, but when ready to use they open up (They would not be massive for graphic and modeling purposes)
- Lustful Dash's animation has The Mistress flapping her wings with her hands behind her back, holding her whip.
Charmed is a new status effect introduced with The Mistress, it makes so the survivor turns directly towards the Killer and walks towards them for the duration.
- If the survivor is behind a wall or solid surface he will not go around it, instead walking into it (to avoid being to easy to land The Mistress' Whip Attack)
MORI:
In her Mori, The Mistress wraps her whip around the survivor's neck and pushes them to the floor, steps on their chest with crushing force while strangling them, until the chest cracks, then she blows a goodbye kiss.
Add-ons:
Browns:
- Frail Rope: Whip Attack applies Deep Wound instead of dealing damage to an injured survivor. Grants 100% Bonus Bloodpoints for Whip Hit in the Brutality Category.
- Old Lip Gloss: Shows the area of effect of Seductive Kiss.
- Broken Heel: Slightly increases (+0.2 seconds) Lustful Dash duration.
- Used Lipstick: Slightly reduces Seduction & Submission (-3 seconds) recharge time.
Yellows:
- Watered-down Perfume: Slightly increases (+4 meters) Seduction & Submission range. Slightly Increases (+6 seconds) Seduction & Submission recharge time.
- Off-brand Lipstick: Moderately reduces (-4 seconds) Seduction & Submission recharge time.
- Unconfortable Heel: Moderately increases (0.4 seconds) Lustful Dash duration.
- Calming Incense: Slightly reduces (-0.25 seconds) Fury duration.
- Flavourless Bubblegum: Slightly decreases (-0.1 seconds) Seductive Kiss' charge time.
Greens:
- Strong Perfume: Moderately increases (+6 meters) Seduction & Submission range. Moderately increases (+8 seconds) Seduction & Submission recharge time.
- Bright Lipstick: Considerably reduces (-5 seconds) Seduction & Submission recharge time.
- High-Heels: Moderately increases (+0.6 seconds) Lustful Dash duration.
- Scented Candles: Moderately reduces (-0.75 seconds) Fury duration.
- Fruity Bubblegum: Moderately decreases (-0.2 seconds) Seductive Kiss' charge time.
Purples:
- French Perfume: Considerably increases (+8 meters) Seduction & Submission range. Considerably increases (+10 seconds) Seduction & Submission recharge time.
- Expensive Heels: Considerably increases (+0.8 seconds) Lustful Dash duration.
- Mint Bubblegum: Considerably decreases (-0.3 seconds) Seductive Kiss' charge time.
- Bladed Whip: Survivors hit by The Mistress' Whip Attack suffer from the Mangled and Haemorrhage status effects for 120 seconds.
Iridescent:
- Iridescent Leather: When a survivor is hit by The Mistress' Whip Attack, all survivors within 16 meters from the hit survivor scream.
- Jason's Tongue: When you put a survivor is put in the dying state with The Mistress' Whip Attack, replenish Seduction & Submission.
Killer Perks:
Correction:
Hex: Taste for Pain's 7 Tokens effect reduces the duration of any and all stuns, the same as all previous effects.
SUrvivor's Lore:
Elijah Pierce was never comfortable as he was, life in a conservative household isn't really welcoming when you don't fit with expectations. Despite all that he managed to survive the abuse from his father, found medical help, developed friendships, and was even accepted at the local baseball team. It didn't take long for people to start complaining about his appearance and what he "really was", despite all that Elijah held to his beliefs and to who he truly was, dedicating himself as much as much as possible to be accepted as so by his peers. During one training session at the local field, the ball was lost amidst the nearby woods, Elijah went to find it and lost himself as a sudden mist descended upon him. After not returning the team went after him, finding only the ball, a few metres off the field.
Appearance:
A little shorter than average, light-skinned, light brown fringe hair and ice blue eyes.
Comments
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Really cool concept! Personally I don't like the appearance( I'm not much a fan of mythical Devil/Angel style) and I think there could be more information on the Charmed status effect, but I love the perks, especially Light's On.
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I'm not a really big fan of the appearance, as I would assume she would have the frame and looks of something like the Witch from L4D2, judged on her backstory. Otherwise, good job!
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What those two said
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I don't know about the killer's power itself. It seems like she's just a better version of deathslinger by your description. But I do like the perks. Lights On being the one I like the least. Jealousy and Taste for Pain both seem fun and playable. I question whether Taste for Pain even needs to be a hex perk. Even if I'm trying to get stunned by pallets it is uncommon for me to eat more than 3 pallets in an entire match. If I manage to eat 7 pallets then I feel like I earned the right to Mori survivors.
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Thx for the feed back! So, to clarify, you also gain stacks from Head On and Decisive Strike stuns, which makes collecting them more easy and therefore the survivors might notice it and remove the Hex. About beign a better Deathslinger, that's why it has a 60s cooldown, but let me know if you think its still not enough.
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I love the concept
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Should reduce the amount of scaling factors on your perks, probably 1-2 at most but 3 is a bit much
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