Chapter idea: The unseen

Chapter idea: The unseen (criticism is welcome)
Killer: The author is a killer based around tracking.
Killer bio: Benedict Baker was drawn to the Macmillan estate as not only was host to largest mass murder in the 21st century but several people went missing after words but Benedict would soon learn why people diapered. What was once a night's sleep in a tent out in the woods soon became a fight for survival as Benedict was transported to the entity's realm where he had to evade the killers that wondered there but he wasn't the only survivor he had seen and interacted with many others but two were more Important to him one of the two was a woman who went by Vigo whenever he escaped through a hatch he would meet Vigo and instruct him on how to escape trials faster informing him that the black lock hatch was always open to him the second one was a man named Alex he was an engineer who had received special tools from Vigo Alex was the one who taught Benedict how to use modern machinery but no matter how much support he had the entity eventually broke him making him join the ranks of the killers who were torturing him now he hunts who he once loved.
Weapon: scythe (two handed)
Ability: The authors ability is called tortured rage, you will make them suffer what you suffered, the author can enter a rage
mode for 30 seconds this increases his speed by 18% for 30 seconds, missed attack cool down is decreased by 15%, vaulting speed is increased by 15%, and attacks are instant downs, the down side is that your aura is revealed for 10 seconds to each survivor and the cool down is 20 seconds.
perks
Perk 1: the authors first perk is called travelers story, your story is long dark and painful and you'd rather not relive it, every 30 seconds you walk around without being in a chase your speed is increased by 3%. (all your gained speed is lost once in a chase) "I've seen a man wondering outside the trials and why he hasn't intervened is beyond me" – Jake Park
Perk 2: the authors second perk is called Vigo's curse, when you last saw her she cursed your name, whenever you destroy a pallet the survivor who dropped it speed is decreased by 10% for 5 seconds but this only works within ten seconds of the pallet being dropped. "you're not a man you’re a monster leave this place for I curse your name" - Vigo
Perk 3: the authors third perk is called a man of few words, you'd rather not talk to them because then you'd start caring, for
every 20 seconds a survivor is injured their skill checks winning area is reduced. "this new killer doesn't speak or even grunt it's a nightmare to avoid because you can't hear him but I guess that’s the point" – David King
Add on's
Old pencil: this old pencil barley has any lead, add 2% to your speed increase during tortured rage.
Used pencil: it's has some ware but it'll work, add 4% to your speed increase during tortured range.
Brand new pencil: this new pencil will help you get your thoughts down, add 6% to your speed increase during tortured.
Broken pen: this old thing is broken but you could use the ink, add 2% to your missed attack reduction during tortured rage.
Used pen: it's almost out of ink but it'll work, add 4% to your missed attack reduction during tortured rage.
Brand new pen: this thing is brand and doesn’t it even looked touched, add 6% to your missed attack reduction during tortured rage.
Ripped paper: there so many pieces missing you can barely write on it, add 2 seconds to tortured rage and add 2 seconds to cool down time.
Wet paper: it's better than nothing, add 4 seconds to tortured rage and add 3 seconds to cool down time.
Stained paper: the paper is stained with a red substance, add 6 seconds to tortured rage and add 4 seconds to cool down time.
New paper: its brand new and untouched, add 8 seconds to tortured rage and add 5 seconds to cool down time.
Survivor: Alex Is a survivor who specializes in keeping track of the killer and completing generators
Survivor bio: "Nobody knows where Alex came from what his last name is or why he hasn't given up but what we do know is that he's vital to our survival he knows his way around machines and that’s all he needs to do to be welcomed into our group with open arms"- benedict baker
Perks
Perk 1: Alex's first perk is called Vigo's blessing, when you last saw her she gave you her blessing, when hiding in a locker you can see the killer's aura when your 30 meters outside their terror radius. "you will make it out of here for I give you my blessing"- Vigo
Perk 2: Alex's second perk is called an engineer's eye, you know how to work and keep a look out, completing a generator will show you the killers aura for 10/12/15 seconds. "You won't stop my work' –Herman carter
Perk 3: Alex's third perk is called hard working hands, the grease on your hands proves your work, whenever you complete a skill check the killer's aura is revealed for 3 seconds "work hard, work quick"- Archie Macmillan
Map
The realm of the forgotten a forest of endless trees
Comments
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Everything sounds cool. I think the biggest thing to think about when creating new ideas is balance. How is this going to work, will it be to overpowered, and how are the players going to try to abuse it.1
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@Scgamecock86 said:
Everything sounds cool. I think the biggest thing to think about when creating new ideas is balance. How is this going to work, will it be to overpowered, and how are the players going to try to abuse it.thanks and ill try to consider balancing in my next idea
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