Ink Demon killer concept

Haven414

I made this concept in the Google doc below if you wanna check it out there. It’s a bit clunky since this is my first killer/chapter concept. There are some things that might seem overpowered or underpowered, but that’s why I wanted to share it here. I would love to hear anyone’s feedback/thoughts on this concept in the replies or feel free to make a comment on a specific part within the Google doc, 'cause I would love to discuss about this. I might even edit it in the future after seeing your responses.

Edit: I might make more of these in the future, my next ideas are concepts for the Fire Face demon from Insidious, the Wendigo from Antlers, and possibly the Blair Witch from The Blair Witch Project.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G-stEM__iyat8RR2vh3EDZUiAiSFrdw939oc4Pt1OF4/edit