Survivor Idea, just survivor idea

Hoodied

Survivor: Arron "A" Frank
Bio: Arron was a olden day worker for a bar, usually he would go to the bar and make a classic of that bar that gave him the nickname "A" he makes the booze using all the booze that starts with the letter "A", but 3 days before he went missing he left a note in the bar, and nobody could read the note, it was not even a language, but some days there is booze outside the bar, and nothing wants to be near it....

Perks:
Hold your breath: You must keep quiet, you don't want to spoil anything. When standing still, working on a generator, or inside a locker your breathing is reduced by 75/90/100% but exhaustion recovers slower by 6/5/4%.
Fast hands: You are used to making and doing somethings at faster rates. Skill checks move slower by 5/6/7% and vault speed is increased by 10/15/15% and slow vault speed is increased by 0/0/15% (stacks with the original vault speed)
Pull yourself together: You are commanding to those who are failing and yourself with "good" words. When you are a survivor is on stage 2 (struggle) and is unhooked by you, they gain a healing speed boost of 20% for the remainder of the trial and there struggle speed is increased by 6/7/8%. When your on stage 2 and unhooked by another player, you will enter the deep wounds state next time you are hit into the injured state for 15/16/17 seconds

Thoughts, ideas?