Fan Made Chapter: 'The Defiant'
Fan made Killer: The Defiant.
The Defiant
Power: 'Burning Passion'
Description of Power: Upon entering the realm of the Entity, Marcus's strength has been enhanced greatly; the veins in his fist glow a vibrant lava-like color. Hold the power button to charge the attack, the longer it is charged the more effect it will have on the survivor!
( The player will be notified that their power is charged up fully when a 'heart-beating' sound is heard at a slow pace; only the killer can hear this, not the survivor )
After letting go of the power button, the killer will swing his weapon ravenously with an increased lunge; the survivor will become injured and a random status effect will be applied to them for a minimum 10 seconds.
Survivors who are affected will not only have the status effects but will have 'Covered Vision'. Covered Vision is where fragments of black will start appearing over the survivor's screen in an attempt to maneuver them or lose their sense of focus. This will appear on and off.
Around the map, there will be tanks that supply water for the Survivors to use; this will get rid of the Covered vision that repeatedly binds them from doing generators.
Healing will get rid of the status effect that a survivor had while affected.
( Survivors can be grabbed off of the water tank by the killer )
( The status effect time can be changed to 60 seconds with the use of an Add-on )
( Status effects range from Mangled to Exhausted )
Character Info for 'The Defiant'
Marcus Jones was one of the quiet boys you'd see in your class, he was quite shy; never really the romantic kind of person. He always managed to get on with his work, sometimes looking opposite his table to see that girl he had an interest in; whenever he had the chance especially with that one high school jock boy being around.
One day during a lesson, Marcus was looking at the girl; her name being Emily, she was quite pretty. For a split second, he looked away then looked back at her; his eyes widened, the high school jock boy was sitting next to her. He caught site of Marcus, eyeing him with a glare; that kind of "you looking at my girl?" glare.
As soon as the bell ringed for lunch, Marcus rushed out like a race car into the bathroom. It was too late, the high school jock followed him in. The last thing Marcus remembered was getting punched in the nose then left on the floor, as the words came out of that boy's mouth: "Don't talk to my girl again, kid." He walked off, the door slammed shut. Marcus lied there, staring blankly; he went unconscious.
Throughout the years, Marcus didn't know what he was containing; all this anger, he should've let it out long ago.
During his college year, there was a party going on; obviously, he wasn't invited. He didn't care though, he lived opposite where the party was anyway; Emily's house.
Once the party was over and everyone left, Marcus made his way out to Emily's house, He let out a deep sigh, it was obvious he cared; he always did.
Marcus eventually found his way inside the house, the scent of cherry blossoms ran up his nostrils. "Wow.." He was truly amazed, coming down the stairs at a silent pace; he saw Emily cleaning up the living room with a broom. He made it to the living room and peeked from the corner, there she was! In his eyes, he panicked too much and she turned around and saw him. "Oh my god, Marcus; what're you doing in here!?" She jumped as she said that, Marcus couldn't explain quick enough; this was all too exciting. "I-I'm here to talk to you, Emily." He spoke, he walked towards her. "G-get away from me!" She yelled, what was she saying?! She started panicking, what the hell did those punks tell her about him? Marcus walked closer and grabbed onto her turtleneck collar; "Look, I'm not bad! I like you, Emily!-" The panic was too much, she smashed a glass mug on his face; moving back quickly with some shards in his face; he grabbed one out and swung his right hand into her stomach.
Marcus watched as Emily fell, in his arms. "No..No..." He muttered, he killed her. He was still holding the bloody glass shard in his hand, all of a sudden hearing the door open. The jock, who had grown up walked into the room; holding a can of beers. "What the hell did you-" Marcus ran at him, glass shard in his right hand. He stabbed him in the neck and stood there, as the jock choked. "Why did you do it?" Marcus asked, taking a deep breath and walking outside; he wasn't seen again.
2 hours later after the incident, Marcus would head deep into the forest; he had eventually got tired and reached a sitting place where there was a broken down stump of a tree. He sat down and placed his hands in his face, after that he looked up and strangely was somewhere different; somewhere he recognized.
'The Defiant' comes with three perks
1st perk: Demented
You play with the survivors in your own twisted way. if a chase has lasted for more than 30/20/15 seconds, you will have an increased lunge with weapon recovery speed decreased/increased. If you are stunned during this time; the chase will reset; the perk has a cool down of 5 seconds.
2nd Perk: Tender ways
Your brutal hits mark scars for the survivor that reveal their location.
*Get notified of an audio cue when an injured survivor starts healing in your Terror Radius.
*The killer will be able to see the bubble aura of an injured survivor when they hear the audio cue.
This perk goes for downed survivors and injured survivors who are healing/ being healed by another survivor.
Gain 50% more blood points for actions in the Brutality category.
3rd perk: Tenacious Presence
Your presence alone instills great fear. Survivors within your Terror Radius suffer increasingly faster when downed. The health bar's speed depending on the perk tier will be 2/3/5
Various killer Add-ons for 'The Defiant'
Rare 'Burning Passion' Add-on
Photograph
A photograph taken of a building on the hills.
*Upon hitting the survivor with 'Burning Passion', the broken status effect is enabled for 50 seconds.
*Amount of vision covered by 'Burning Passion' is tremendously increased.
"You've been there before, I know you have."
Uncommon 'Burning Passion' Add-on
Shredded Cloth
A piece of ripped cloth, ripped forcefully.
*Amount of vision covered by 'Burning Passion' is moderately increased.
"I watched him forcefully rip part of the cloth from the corpse, he just sat there."
Ultra Rare 'Burning Passion' Add-on
Written Plans
A paper with a steadily planned sequence, the holder of this paper gains the ability to further stall time.
*Survivors who attempt to recover from 'Burning Passion' take an extra 3 seconds.
Common 'Burning Passion' Add-on
Readable note
A paper in the description of a note, presumably to a love interest.
*Slightly decreases cool down of 'Burning Passion'
"I've watched you."
Very rare 'Burning Passion' Add-on
Ruined Balloon
A balloon that has been repeatedly stabbed to the point where it is unusable.
*Upon hitting a survivor with 'Burning Passion' the Hindered status effect is enabled for 60 seconds.
"What did you do to my gift?"
Those were the various Add-ons that I thought were important
If there are other Add-ons that i'd add; it would be more versions of the 'Balloon Add-ons' that have more horrifying status effects.
*Readable note add-on versions, these will make the cool down faster.
*Shredded Cloth add-on versions, these will help cover more vision ( Does not stack )
*Photograph add-on versions will have a 50/30 second status effect
*Written plan add-on will have no versions, it is okay by itself.
Comments
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I drew the icons for 'The Defiant' perks and add-ons.
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Power is cool but i dont think it should totally block off generators. Maybe just make them harder? Even with Freddy and the Plague you can still work on generators.
1st perk: Demented- This is a great perk, but how much are the numbers effected?
2nd Perk: Tender ways- Another great idea but I'd recommend putting a delay in between notifications so they don't see every survivor healing and just one.
3rd perk: Tenacious Presence- Not sure what this does exactly. Does it make them bleed out 2/3/5x faster? If so that's probably to good allowing slug builds to become much more effective.
Addons seem legit but Written Plans is almost useless, with just an extra 3 seconds of vision issues.
Powers neat, Perks are neat, addons are good, and the artwork is nice and original, I enjoyed this chapter overall
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Hello, apologies for taking so long to reply to you.
I appreciate your comment on my fan chapter, it really makes me happy! I'll answer your questions here.
Demented: Obviously the numbers are affected depending on the tier of the perk, if you mean during a chase; before the qualified number is reached for the perk to work; it will not activate though I can say that truly a chase should last at least 15 seconds at the most.
Tender Ways: I agree with you about the notification delays, they seem pretty reasonable to have. This brings me to an idea of reworking it so it only applies to the survivors in your terror radius who are given the effect similar to Nurses Calling.
Tenacious Presence: Completely agree with you on this one, for this i'd rework the perk to make it so that status effects that the killer applies to the survivor ( except delaying their exhaustion ) lasts at least a few seconds longer.
Thank you for your compliments! I'll be releasing a new fan chapter soon.
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