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This is an amazing killer idea. It might be difficult to pull off, and even more hellish to balance correctly, but by god if it wouldn't be worth every damn drop of effort. I can only imagine how amazing watching them switch would be. It would be like watching one step from the other's shadow, both of them dancing and twisting around each other as the first vanishes behind the new one. It would have to work like that from all angles, though, so that'd be the hard part.
Also, a few things. I feel that maybe 30 whole seconds of auto backtrack is a bit high. I'd max it at that with add ons, but not as base kit. The 12 second wait on her partner's power feels a bit lengthy, unless I'm missing a bit of the strategy you had in mind.
Their perks are all amazing, especially Til Death. It would be hilarious to see someone try to get a cheeky unhook, only to be locked in with the hooked guy when you leave.
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I will admit when it came to their power, I kinda rushed it. In retrospect, 30 seconds is a bit long. Maybe cut it in half with 15 seconds instead? And as for the other Lover, the idea kinda came from just to give the survivor a bit of a chance to escape before having to be slowed down, but I guess that kinda defeats the purpose as well.
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Edits posted!
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This deserves more publicity. Back to the top of the list with thee!
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Beautiful chapter!
This is one of the few fan chapters I actually sat to read through the lore, and I’m impressed! Their power is awesome, but I feel like Daisy’s power is a bit on the weaker side. I actually thought of something that would be pretty interesting for it. So, I’m just gonna get it off my chest:
- The power automatically targets all Survivors within the Killer’s terror radius.
- When activated, all Survivors are notified through a loud, hurried ticking of a clock. After two seconds, all Survivors within the Killer’s terror radius will experience a twisted reality where they can no longer see the Killer or any other Survivors.
- The Killer can still see and attack Survivors under the influence of Cherished Time. Attacking a Survivor forces them out of the effect and awards bloodpoints.
- This effect lasts for about 3-5 seconds.
So it’s like a reverse-Spirit kind of. Instead of the Killer having to assume where the Survivors are, the Survivors have to assume where the Killer is. There’s a cooldown too, obviously.
There’s that. Now, where was I? Oh yeah! Good chapter!
Although, I do feel that the perks could use some work... That’s my only complaint.
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The power is great but I'm not really feeling the perks. Great job on the lore btw.
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Thank so much for the reviews and compliments! I’m really glad everyone enjoys this chapter! Worked hard on that lore!
( And please check out my other chapters and tell me what you think too!)
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I... LOVE the Killer's lore. The perks sound solid too, except for the basement one as I feel that may be a bit too hard to balance, but maybe if it had a distance requirement from the basement like Territorial Imperative? It may add synergy with it and BBQ & Chili, if nothing else. But other than that, super creative idea!
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Bumping up
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I think turn up the heat has a typo. It says that they will be instantly moved to the injured state. Aren't they already in the injured state when they're removed from the hook?
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"a two in one killer(s)" - immediately thought of Legion and cried inside :(
But great chapter idea :)
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I actually meant to fix Turn Up The Heat, because I realize that mistake a while ago but forgot about it, but I edited it now!
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Cherished time
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I already seen that type of killer on this forum, he is called the Watchmaker. I liked the balance in the watchmaker a little more tbh.
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This is exactly the effect I see for these two. Though, doing it with two whole bodies would be a bit difficult, especially if it's meant to be seen from almost any angle...
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The two bodys cant be presented at all times. Would it walk behind or next to you
How you go though doors or weave though trees like that ?
You'd have to make them Siamese twins in some way or have one in a shadow realm or have them possess each other like enchantress does
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The way I see it, it would be kinda like the Enchantress. Their fingers would intertwine, and they would spin in a tight spiral. It would look like they're dancing pressed back to back, and at the end, the other Lover is the one standing there.
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Thank you GeneralSpudMuffin, you are perfectly explaining exactly what I had in mind
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No prob bob
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