The Monster Under Your Bed " The Ghoul & Jane Arkensaw" -Chapter Idea- (Updated V21 UNFINISHED)

I didn't bother to read the power or the perks of the Survivor.

For one, Jeff is a boring and stale creepypasta villain. Two, most of his perks are just... not it chief.

Enraged is fine.

Obsession: Livid is a cool perk in concept, and it wouldn't be overly powerful as most Killers, but here's the thing. It rewards the Killer for messing up. No perk should do this, this is why people hate Noed.

Anger Management is just better Overcharge, which is a painfully powercrept perk as is. Better off replaced entirely, as the concept is a crowded one with Overcharge and Pop Goes the Weasel, as well as Oppression and Dragon's Grip.

Dead Hard requires precise timing and prediction on both sides. This rewards you for actively losing the Survivor by being able to see them through walls for 10 or so seconds. That is basically guaranteeing a hit if you know how to click m1.

Your question on how it rewards the Killer, other than applying its only effect, makes it seem like you think the perk is bad and has no useful effect. In which case why the hell did you make it?

I'd say just rework the perk. The concept rewards a Killer for being bad.

Hey remember me? I looked at this some more and had some ideas.

1)Power: You need to settle on either "Overt Chaser" or "Stealthy Ninja" I went with the Ninja route in my idea for this. Anyway decrease his terror radius to 20 meters. Then remove the first Legion-}Myers power, take his locker hiding and make it apply to Chests, Gens, Lockers, and Totems. He can teleport between these similarly to Freddy, with a laugh whenever he teleports. Make him take a few seconds to emerge from something, and have Undetectable for a short time, 10-20 seconds. Also he cannot teleport or emerge from something a survivor is interacting with. This allows him to hide and move about quickly and somewhat discreetly, while still allowing Survivors to know where you more or less are.

2)Perks: I like Enraged, but make it need 50% progress and remove the oblivious part. Then, change the speed to closer to other speed perks, because +15 is Legion perk speed, maybe it gets faster as it decreases more, up to +15 in the last few seconds. On the bonus side, it only stops when you hit a survivor or the gen stops regressing. This would allow him to hit a gen, and run away to bother other survivors, getting faster while it goes until he hits you, or another survivor stops the regression, plus it would work nicely with my version of Anger Management.

Livid sounds interesting, but currently its too all over the place to work consistently, you need to down someone, then chase them later, which then lets you know for a few seconds where your previously chased AND downed obsession was? Maybe make it something like Light born, every time a survivor(not the obsession) stuns you(pallet, flashlight, DS, etc) you can see their auras for 4/5/6 seconds and they become your obsession. This would give him a bit of Aura reading while also allowing it to combo with other Obsession perks, like Rancor.

Anger Management is just so busted, the only way it might work is as a hex, even then I would take it down to one skill check. Either way its still basically Overcharge. If I may, how about this? Every time you kick a generator, Anger Management take affect, for the next 1/2/3 generators, every time a survivor starts repairing it it makes a loud noise for you, allowing you to punish their audacity for repairing in your presnese.

I commented earlier.

I enjoyed reading this, could you maybe give me some of your time and read my pinhead idea, here is the link. https://forum.deadbydaylight.com/en/discussion/229448/pinhead-as-a-killer/p1?new=1