2v8 Lore Issue

The Legion would NOT be afraid of other killers. We're talking about psycho teenage edge lords here.. They'd get themselves in trouble, likely landing on the bad side of every killer. Joey would try to feed hag like a dog, Susie would steal one of the Spirits limbs, Frank would try to square up with the Trapper, and Julie would cockily and meanly give beauty tips to the Plague.

You can't scare Punks, they always act bigger than they really are. To show how "not scared" they are they would each do something completely idiotic that would make them hated by every killer.

I disagree with your opinions on the legions ability to cooperate, being someone who has been a teenager and been around dumb teenagers that think they're big and tough, I've seen my fair share of dares to go poke the sleeping homeless guy. And the fact that they are paranormally connected, and they get supernatural strength from the entity, this would only make them more cocky. But I am interested in that potential fan fiction for 2v8 scenarios. Please link me if you do make it.

oni would respect spirit and all but if she holds a grudge like his father he might go batshit and kill her

and as for the rest of them they would all ######### hate each other except maybe ghostface and freddy. pig would probably be terrified considering amandas character and the rest would be forced to work together if this ever became I mode (I hope it does)

I'll definitely give it a read once I'm back from work, from what I've seen from the others, it's probably pretty damn good. If you don't mind, could you specifically give me some feedback/further opinions on what I say about Hillbilly, Doc, Myers, Pig,, and especially, Ghostface, Spirit, Demogorgon and Oni? If you don't mind, of course.

Hello again, so I was finally able to read your stories and gotta say, yup, they're pretty great.

I loved how initially they did what everyone thought they'd do, fight like hell. I'd like to once again, take it step by step.

I honestly really liked the interaction between Evan and Pig at the end of the initial post. It comes across as two co-workers with mutual respect for their actual personalitys but not their actual work. I also loved how you made Evan, basically, respectful gentleman.

For chapter 2, I only have one gripe with it. I don't like how easily the Demo backed down. We're talking about a creature that massacred a entire facility and can shrug off point blank gunshots, I'm sorry, but I highly doubt someone big shouting at it would cause much of a reaction. Too be fair though, you could argue that this Demo we have in DBD isn't THAT original Demo. With that out of the way, you did make me change my mind about Oni's perspective, I really liked how much honest respect he had for it. Also, THANK YOU for making the Demo not just some mindless creature.

Chapter 3, I kinda figured Freddy would be a complete asshat, it's just what he does. My question is, what happened that made Freddy go that hard on Max and also, what was the interaction like before the trail? I didn't see such kindness coming from Max though. On final note, I loved how Quientin was thrilled to hear that Freddy was mori'd.

Chapter 4, I'll make this short, I really like how you write the Legion gang, they honestly seem very down to earth compared to other killers. Doc is also pretty interesting, out of trials, as you said, he seems very condescending yet a bit likable still . In trials though, he's a absolute professional who wants to do his job, no interruptions.

Chapter 5, I'll make this even shorter, I adored how you wrote Nurse and Wraith. I also found it quite amusing how Tapp tried to both use killer tools and take them.

Chapter 6 is very starting to delve into Evan kinda being a "historian" figure, which is very enjoyable to see. It's also nice how you touched on just how lonely Evan must feel. I'd also like to say, big props for making time basically meaningless, keeping true to actual lore.

One final thing, a request, after Kazan and Rin(btw thanks again for using my idea for Rin having "shattered" emotions that fluctuate, greatly appreciated) I'd love to see how you handle Ghostface. Especially his whole swell and likable guy portion then happy go lucky murderer by trail.

I could 100% see Evan having many conflicting feelings. On one hand, he's a professional and was brought up showing respect to others that are deserving of it. On the other hand though, he arguably knows much more about the Entity then any other killer. For all he knows, this is simply a short phase that the Entity is going through so he might not want to make many connections despite how lonely he is. To add onto that, he might think they're simply talking to him literally just as a ends to a need, nothing more, nothing less.

For the Demo, I truly wish that it's backstory had more to it because it never remotely explains if it's the og Demo or just simply another one. Another conflicting thing is if it's a young or adult Demo. Just standing, it's around 7ft tall but I believe I heard a dev say one time, if it properly stood upright, it would easily be the tallest killer at around 10ft, which leads me, personally, to believe it's a adult but I'm not certain on it. I know writing for Demo must be hard but, this might sound crazy, but I'd love a chapter from it's perspective. Something akin to this video, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SNoQZ9rTVvQ.

I'm definitely interested to see where this story goes. I'll be honest though, I'm super interested to see Herman and Evan work together. It'll be cool to see two absolute professionals work together on a work level but probably clash on a personal level and of course, I'm looking forward to how Ghostface sees the "off brand" version of himself with one of the Legion members. Like I've been saying, apparently he's a swell guy but seeing something like that might get him pissed off for obvious reasons.

Wraith and Nurse has always been a interesting couple to say the least. I've also gotta say, I definitely liked the shift in tone for that one, made it much sweeter. I also wasn't thinking that would be the worst thing to happen. I was thinking more along the lines of Entity punishment, if he actually succeeded in taking the items, of course.

Hoping it does come later today! Once again, truly appreciate the complements about the Rin idea and the fact that you're using it is super cool. I also really appreciate the fact that you take feedback and suggestions so seriously. Good luck on your homework!

Thanks for the heads up. ^_^

So umm, that ended pretty dark, though it does make sense because of how loyal Kazan was towards the samurai ways. Hearing how Japan has now abandoned the old ways to embrace the new and ESPECIALLY hearing a descendent of his embrace those ways probably crushed him emotionally. Fantastic work!

On a completely different note though, what did you think of my Demo idea? Also, if you watched it, did you think the video would be a good way of going about how the Demo's thoughts could come across as? Maybe a bit less aggressive and hateful though and more, curious.

I can definitely see it being confusing, I'd honestly would have to say it would probably have to be part of another single chapter but that's all you. For your second and thrid part, you make very good points here. Since you haven't watched ST's I'll try to keep it as spoiler free and as short as possible. When it comes to the Demo's, they are very "hush hush" on their actual origins. On theory though is that their either evolved humans or humans that were once experimented on and broke loose and, well, took over. So if you subscribe to either of those theories then that could help.

Freddy would attack if they came to his street! Haven't you seen freddy vs jason?