New Map/Killer: The Scorpion King

Maouk

I read another post about the Scorpion King and I thought to add a bit of a story to it and his powers. Let me know what you think about it. I'd love to improve it. :)

MAP

The players have crashed with a cargo plane in the middle of the desert during the night. Fortunately, there's an oasis nearby, so they can drink something while they wait for rescuers. They go to sleep, but when they wake up the next morning, the area is walled in and a strange black pyramid has appeared out of thin air right. This is the lair of the Scorpion King, a creature half-man, half-scorpion who has the powers of the ancient Egyptian gods.

There are three main locations in the area: the oasis, the wreckage of the cargo plane, and the black pyramid. Steep dunes dot the area while skeletons of dead trees offer a feeble protection against the anger of the Scorpion King.

PERKS

Nefertum's Lotus – The god of the lotus blossom bestowed the Scorpion King the ability to plant up to four lotuses around the map. They reveal any players that walk or run within 6 meters from them.

Wrath of Ra - The god of the Sun gives the Scorpion King the ability to shine its vengeful light. When the Scorpion King hits a player, Ra curses him and the player's skill checks' success zones are reduced by 40/50/60%. If the player is hooked, Ra releases him from the curse otherwise, the only way to remove it is to kneel in front of one of the dark moons scattered around the map.

The eye of Osiris - Thanks to the god of death and resurrection, the Scorpion King can sense any survivors nearby a hooked player in a 24-meter range.

LOAD-OUT

Weapon: Scorpion Claws

The claws are a primary weapon for the Scorpion King. He uses them to hold his victims and to honor the Egyptian gods.

Power: Venomous sting.

The player hit by the Scorpion King's tail is Hindered.

IWannaBeAGhostFace

Well the idea is great ( a bit vague ), but one thing you may need to look out for is 1º: The explanation of the power its to vague, like you don't explain the time it take to use it or the cooldown, thing that are crucial, and the 2º: Hindered is a Status Effect, that's a bit rare, why? you ask me, because it's too powerfull ( usually found in green addons ), slowing a survivor down in his movement speed, is detrimental to them and 3º: The perks are too strong, altough the first one is pretty dope and their names are cool too, knowing when a survivor is near another on the hook up to 24 meters is too strong and encourages camping.

But anyway, as i already said previously i think i realy cool.