New chapter concept: Retribution of the Unwanted

DragonMasterDarren

So I've been extremely bored during the last few months, so much so that I have had a lot of time to think about what I want to see in Dead By Daylight, so I came up with a chapter concept, featuring a new map, a new killer, and a new survivor, Hope you like the idea

"Here is the latest chapter for Dead By Daylight, experience the troubled past and consequences of a tragic upbringing with Chapter XX, Retribution of the Unwanted"

New Map: Cathedral Ruins, Sanctuary Grove

"Once a vibrant temple of worship, the now derelict cathedral played host to a violent and brutal revenge massacre, 50 people had gathered in that cathedral the night it happened, none were alive when the fire was doused, it's ruins sit in the realm of the entity, amidst the grove that provided some reprieve from one's miserable life"

The map is the same size as Wretched Shop, generators are relatively close together but just far enough way for most killers to struggle keeping a 3 gen (wouldn't want that to be TOO easy), the centre structure consists of 2 floors with 2 staircases, one is blocked with a breakable wall and the other has a pallet, the centre structure has 2 other pallets and 2 windows, one of which is a god window unless the wall next to it is broken. Chaining the tiles on the map is relatively difficult as there's a few dead zones sprinkled throughout.

New Survivor (I'm doing this first because the killer is LONG), Marcus Reqala

Marcus was raised by a single mother who wanted nothing but the best for him, which is why he was heartbroken after he came home one night to find his mother murdered, swearing vengeance, he donned his darkest clothes, phoned the police, and tracked down her killer, beating him to within a inch of his life, and then handing him over to the police. Marcus realised he had found his calling, becoming a vigilante, that was until a thick fog enveloped him, he awoke to a realm of hooks, murder and torture, he saw people resting at a campfire, and knew they needed his help

Appearance: Marcus wears a grey cloth over the lower part of his face, a dark grey shirt and a black leather jacket, grey jeans and dark brown leather boots

Perks:

Vigilante's Trickery

Pressing the active ability button over a broken pallet or wall for a short duration will allow you to reconstruct the pallet or wall just as it was before, this perk can only be used 3 times per trial, once per pallet or wall, and incurs a cooldown of 300/240/180 seconds depending on level

"You learn a few things when you fight crime on a daily basis" - Marcus Reqala

For the Victims

Taking a protection hit for another survivor will give the survivor the endurance status effect for 10 seconds, you then become broken for 60/50/40 seconds after taking the hit

"Thank me later" - Marcus Reqala

Shadowy Peacekeeper

Flashlight saving another survivor will activate this perk, while this perk is active, the killer cannot see your aura and actions that would normally trigger a noise notification no longer do so for 30/45/60 seconds

"I'm a vigilante, and I don't respect those that take pleasure in hurting others, so I'll do whatever it takes to bring you down" - Marcus Reqala

New Killer: The Vengeful (Nate Sanders)

Nate had a rough upbringing, abandoned by his birthparents, abused by children at the orphanage he was dropped off at and permanently scarred across his face by a bully, however, there was a reprieve, one day a family came to the orphanage, saw him, took pity on him, and took him in, giving him their name and asking for nothing in return, other then to behave himself. Something he always struggled to do, fumbling through every social interaction he found himself in, and had developed a mistrust of others before he even first entered school, which he did surprisingly well in academically, socially, not so much, he was naturally made fun off for the scar across his face, but a few people found it attractive, in particular one very attractive girl, they talked, he constantly messed things up, but she taught him how to articulate himself and other basic social skills, things were finally looking up for him, until one day, his flirtations drew the attention of the school bully, a very rough kid that bought his lackey's loyalty, they pinned him to a wall once school had ended, beat him up, and finally cut off 2 of his fingers. Leaving him in the alley to suffer, making it crystal clear that if he so much as told another soul about this or talked to the girl ever again, they'd draw the knife across his throat.

Nate was done with being downtrodden, he wasn't a idiot, he had been expecting something like this, and learned each and every one of the bully's patterns, where they lived, and where in the house they slept, he went to each and every single one in the dead of night, and stabbed each of them through the heart, killing them instantly,

Nate had intended on ending his spree there, until the police learned of what he did, he was disowned by his foster parents, sentenced to 10 years imprisonment and the girl he had loved had told him they were through. That was the last straw. Nate served a bit of his sentence, escaping after a convenient prison fire burned the bars to his cell. Afterwards he found every single person who had wronged him before his sentencing in the cathedral celebrating Christmas, he locked the doors, and burned it down

He didn't think it through, the fire cost him what remained of his right arm, he lay bleeding and burning in the cathedral, laughing manically, as a dark fog enveloped his vision, replacing his ruined arm with a black swirling mass, he didn't feel any more pain, other then a deep seated feeling that those who wronged him were in this new realm, and he had the opportunity to make them suffer for eternity.

Appearance: The Vengeful is always shrouded in a black mist that violently swirls around his body, when it occasionally disperses you are able to identify burned clothes, piercing white eyes, skin that's a patchwork of human skin and the mist covering his burns, and a long black claw where his right arm should be

Power: Vengeful Fury

Pressing the active ability button will trigger Vengeful Fury, the Vengeful will move forwards at 150% movement speed for 5 seconds, after these 5 seconds or of the Vengeful own volition, the Vengeful will disperse the black mist that surrounds him, blocking off all vaults, breaking any downed pallets and injuring any survivors in a 10 meter radius, after using this ability it will enter a 30 second cooldown

Vengeful Fury has a secondary ability called Retribution's Claw, pressing M2 will cause the Vengeful to extend his claw arm, if a survivor gets caught by it, they will be pulled towards the Vengeful and injured, this has a 5 second cooldown, half the range of The Redeemer and incurs a hefty penalty for hitting a object or missing, Retribution's claw can also not be used to down a survivor

Perks:

Vengeance's Rewards

You become obsessed with one survivor, when the obsession unhooks another survivor or completes a generator, you will gain a token, for each token, you gain 5% increased bloodlust gain, 5% increased vaulting speed and 5% faster breaking speed, up to a maximum of 4 tokens, you will keep the tokens if the obsession dies

"Not fun being picked on is it?" - Nate Sanders

Hex: Vengeance

Every time you down a survivor, they will suffer from the broken status effect, once the totem is broken all currently broken survivors will remain broken for 60 seconds and suffer from oblivious for 20/30/40 seconds

"I've seen how you operate, and i know how when to strike"

Retribution's presence

You become obsessed with one survivor, if the obsession lingers inside your terror radius for 60/50/40 seconds, you gain a token, for each token, you gain a 5% haste effect, this effect remains until you are in a chase with the obsession

"Guilty by association i say" - Nate Sanders

Addons

COMMON

The Last Match: "the match that ended it all" slightly increases the reach of Retribution's Claw

Book and Quill: "The first record of his plans of revenge" slightly decreases the cooldown of Vengeful Fury

Ink bottle: "The bottle that stored his preferred method of writing" slightly decreases the penalty of missing Retribution's Claw

Tattered Clothes "the remains of the uniform he wore that night" slightly increases movement speed while charging Vengeful Fury

UNCOMMON

Bloody Chains "The chains he was imprisoned in" moderately increases the reach of Retribution's Claw

Tattered Page "The page with the plan" moderately decreases the cooldown of Vengeful Fury

Ink Splotch "Some of his spilled ink" moderately decreases the penalty of missing Retribution's Claw

Night Light "Something he used to continue planning in the dark of night" survivors injured by Vengeful Fury suffer from the Haemorrhage status effect until they are healed

Old book "A old book he used to read" Slightly increases movement speed after missing Retribution's Claw

RARE

Old Knife "The knife that cut off his fingers" considerably increases the reach of Retribution's Claw

Pinky Finger "His right pinky finger" considerably decreases the cooldown of Vengeful Fury

Ring Finger "His right ring finger" Survivors injured by Retribution's Claw are inflicted with Oblivious and Blindness for 60 seconds

Family Photo "The image of the family that disowned him" Considerably increases movement speed after missing Retribution's Claw

Lock of Hair "They went to get a haircut together once, he still keeps one piece of her" considerably decreases the penalty of missing Retribution's Claw

VERY RARE

Collection of Plans "All of the plans he made for the bullies, his parents found them after he was imprisoned" Allows Retribution's Claw to down survivors, after downing a survivor with Retribution's Claw, all survivor's auras are revealed to you for 10 seconds, Tremendously increases the penalty for missing Retribution's Claw

Snapped Quill "He snapped this quill in a fit of rage" Tremendously decreases the cooldown of Vengeful Fury

His Journal "He kept his emotions in this Journal, one of the few ways he could keep himself sane" Injuring multiple survivors with Vengeful Fury blocks all vaults in a 60 meter radius, moderately increases the cooldown of Vengeful Fury

Family Painting "His foster parents", Injuring survivors with Retribution's Claw inflicts Exhaustion for 30 seconds

ULTRA RARE

Iridescent Quill "A quill forged from a warm, glass like material, it pulses with the entity's power" Injuring survivors with Retribution's Claw or Vengeful Fury inflicts Broken for 30 seconds outside of a chase

Bully's Heart "The heart of the heartless bully that took his fingers" You become obsessed with one survivor, the obsession will cycle through Oblivious, Blindness and Broken every 30 seconds

So yeah, that's the chapter i came up with, i think it's pretty good, what do you think?