Young writer have some ideas
Hello,
I'm so addicted to DbD that I imagine it in my own world.
I hope it does not go for pretense, I just did it for fun, just to tell my brain, "Here I am mixing the two, you let me write now?" Because it's been 3 days since I only think about this game! lol
Well, for the little explanation, I'm an author. I am currently on volume 6 of a series like Harry Potter with a school of witchcraft but in parallel, a war between wizards and witches hunters ... So it's been doing since I install DbD I do not write a line anymore and when I try to focus on my book, it mixes with DbD ^^ "
So here ... I imagine what my darling would give in the world of dead by daylight.
Before going any further, to understand why this and why that, let's talk about the character. I warn you, it'll be long ^^"
In Poland, the children are frightened by the Bubak (or also Bebok, Babok, Bobok or Hastrman) who is described as a man, more often with the appearance of a skeletal scarecrow, with a bag that takes the children to eat them . It is said that he can also kidnap adults. He is known for hiding in the banks and imitating the sound of a lost baby, in order to attract the imprudent ones. He weaves moonlit nights, makes clothes for his stolen souls, and has a cart pulled by cats.
So a kind of Boogeyman.
My version is a little softer. I based myself on the story of the full moon nights and changed it. He was a human long ago, but a curse made him a monster. During the day, he is a bloodthirsty beast, he kills everything that crosses his path. At night he becomes himself again, sweet and wise. His hobby: sewing and he guides people lost in the forest.
In dead by daylight, it's always dark ... so he can not become a ferocious beast ... or almost. We come to what I imagined:
Story (based on what I invented for him in my book):
There are people with whom fate is simply unfair. Bubak is one of them. He lived in Poland with his family and while he was weak and fearful, his wife was fighting and defending him. Their family had many enemies, and his wife was often injured.
Exhausted by this situation, Bubak found a fairy and, driven by despair, forced her to give him power, courage and strength enough to protect his wife and children. Furious at his gesture, the fairy hit him, instead, with a curse.
When he regained consciousness, at sunset, he noticed a change in his appearance. His blond hair and blue eyes had turned red, his skin had become gray and dull ... and he was covered with the blood of his wife and daughters, who were lying dead at his feet.
Bubak fled screaming, trying to kill himself, without success. He moved away from any civilization, as far as possible, never to risk hurting anyone. And the further he went into the woods, the more it seemed to him suddenly that he would never be able to leave again ... a murmur came to him, a promise, the death he wanted so much. But there were other people, and they did not want to die. In this world of eternal night, he had to live long enough to protect a maximum of innocent people.
Perks :
True self:
Let's not forget that the Bubak is above all a light-fearing monster. This skill activated, he could go crazy. When he is too close to a lit generator, a timer appears (I was thinking of a kind of sun that "fills") indicating that the skill will activate if we do not leave the light box (let's say a few meters around the generator) If he's on the spot when the generator turns on, then it's immediate.
The player literally loses control and Bubak resumes his animal instincts, will go to the nearest person, survivor or killer. If he attacks the killer, it will knock out the killer (like when we light him or we escape him) if it is a survivor, it will hurt him. It can be cool but at the same time dangerous. A double-edged blade. As soon as he attacks, he regains his senses. If you are still in the light, the timer will appear again. It's not just the generators. Flashlights, pointed at him for a while, can also drive him crazy. If a survivor points his lamp at him while he is hooked, he will be able to get off the hook ... while taking the hook with him, who will become an object (with which he can leave if he wants). In front of the killer, the hook is useless. It is better to slip in his back to attack with it. Preferably if he is carrying someone. (I imagine that it stuns him too ... and he keeps the hook planted in the back until the end of the game XD)
"Get away from me! I may hurt you! »= Bubak
Fright :
bubak is one of the most feared creatures in the world (in my book ^^ ") and the killer knows it ... 1 time per game (maybe 2 times when the skill reaches level 3) the Bubak can send a "screamer "to the killer, if the killer pursues him. He will just be stunned (in addition to a scare for the player XD)
"I think he's scared of me ..." = Bubak
Small stitching:
The Bubak knows how to handle the thread and needles better than anyone! The fact of always carrying this tool on him, allows him to use it for the care. He heals others faster and can heal himself.
"It should do the trick! »= Bubak
Congratulations and thanks if you had the courage to read to the end. He may sound a little cheater ... that's why I added that he could also attack the survivors. Finally, anyway, he will not appear in the game, it's just to laugh huh
But tell me if you like him ! 😊
I have a lot of other ideas of this kind (like the killer who "come with" Bubak) other characters and their maps ... I do not think that my idea interests you, but after all, who does not try nothing has nothing
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I'm sorry for this double-post, but many ideas came to complete all that.
Notably, the killer. To know that in truth these two there are friends ^^"
Let's start by presenting the character.Mako is a Manticore. In Persian legend, the manticore is a huge lion with a red coat, black mane, three rows of teeth, a human face and a scorpion tail. For my part, I wanted to do him more "human". He is well covered with short scarlet fur and has a "mane" (in fact it is his hair that is very thick and unruly) black. In my version, it is his body that is human ... or almost. His legs end in paws, like the hind legs of a lion, and have powerful claws. His hands are clawed too. Of course he has a scorpion tail. For his face, I made a mix between feline and human. It is "placed" like that of a human, but his eyes are those of a lion and his nose is very flat .... like a lion.
So, why put him in killer while in my book, he is nice?
Manticores are simply described as "the most disgusting and dangerous beast existing in the magical world"Killer Name: "The Beast"
Story:
An animal. A monster. This is what Mako has always heard from humans about him. With his parents and two sisters, he wanted only one thing: to live in peace. But they were manticores. Monsters described as bloodthirsty and unconscious.
As a child, Mako saw his father stand up against humans, who wanted to decimate them, and die. His mother took him and his sisters away from their den to protect them, find a new shelter, but the men did not want to let them escape. The manticore had then only one idea. She threw her three children to the sea, from the top of a cliff, and shouted to them to swim as far as possible, before dying under the arms of humans.
Mako obeys, without knowing where to go. He lost his two sisters by sight, and finally arrived on a bank, after days. He found a quiet piece of forest, and settled there for several years, until humans found him.
Mako first tried to explain himself, tried to communicate, but the men did not want to hear anything, blinded by their hatred. The images of his parents, who had died under their blows, and then of his sisters washed away by the waves, echoed in his head, and he felt a strong anger about men. Humans did not deserve clemency or forgiveness. They were the real monsters. He blushed with rage and threw himself on the hunters who had come to kill him. He shredded them one by one, poisoned them, and slaughtered them to the last.
Surrounded by human corpses torn apart, Mako heard a murmur in the woods. The promise of his revenge. The hunt was going to start.weapon: His claws.
Ability: When a survivor is on the ground, he can sting and thus poison him (The survivor would take place as when he is injured (hand on the belly, cry ect) but it would not let traces of blood, and it would be impossible to treat him until he has found the antidote . Not only could he be more easily found by the killer (moans + course less quickly) but in addition he would end up on the ground at once. There could be a timer that gives an idea of the poison's advance in his body, and when he gets to the end, the survivor ends up on the ground.). A poisoned survivor will have to find on the map a unicorn (You say it when I go too far XD) who walks in order to be cured. The beast can also squat and walk on all fours to hunt. I imagine the unicorn change depending on the map. Kind, a game against him on the doctor's map, the unicorn would be a little decrepit, with cables attached to it, as if the doc had wanted to experiment on it.
If we are on the map of Freddy, a unicorn burned, like Freddy, and very scary.
Finally, a bit like the hooks that change depending on the killer who owns the map.perks:
Camouflage of the predator:
An additional mist effect envelops a wide radius around the killer, hiding his movements as he hunts the survivors. The intensity and the radius of the mist increase in stages.
"I see you, little fries ..." = MakoTo fight or flee:
The speed of movement of the survivors is greatly increased, but there is also a great chance that a successful hit on an uninjured survivor will immediately put him in critical condition. The speed of movement of the survivors and the possibility of putting them in the critical state are increased in stages.
"You will not be able to escape! = MakoThrill of the beast:
When the killer succeeds in striking a survivor, for a brief period, the other closest survivor sees the red spot as if the killer were standing directly behind him. If he performs a repair, healing or sabotage action during the appearance of the red spot, he is confronted with more frequent and difficult skill tests. The duration of the red spot and the number of affected survivors are increased by level.
"I always feel like he's behind me ..." = ???momento:
When Mako is given the right to kill the survivor himself, he raises him/her up, plates the survivor against him, and uses his scorpion tail to sting him/her in sensitive places (face, neck, chest) and then throws the survivor to the ground, who convulse a moment before dying.Map: The ruins of Atlantis:
"No habitation was yet complete and the griffins were fluttering with pegasus, alicornes and hippogriffs.Overlooking the ancient city, was a huge temple in perfect condition, which seemed covered with frost. [...] They passed by what appeared to be an old market, the wooden stalls, collapsed, were, for some, still filled with terracotta fabrics or objects, sometimes intact.The cobblestones that once formed roads through the city were missing by moss-covered, with a lot of grass growing between the stones.On what was to be the main square, the carved fairy, on the fountain, had lost a hand, part of its wings and head, which dragged in the greenish water bottom. " = Volume 4, chapter 7And on of my friend find a title for their chapter!
I made this little drawing to have fun
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Can I... Can I do a triple post ? o_o
Good, good ... for some weeks I finally got to horror movies, starting with the slashers ... and as a good novelist, I, of course, had my own idea in the same genre X)
So why not imagine it in dead by daylight huh?Peter Rose - Killer
Killer Name: The Scarecrow
History:
Peter Rose was not born under the protection of a guardian angel. Small, frail, asthmatic and presbyopic, his mother is an alcoholic and his father just enjoys hitting him. He takes all the more blows since the birth of his little sister, Cerise, aged just 1 year, because he protects her. The violence of his family gradually made him mute. His face is often swollen by his father's blows, and he is also harassed at school by more talkative guys.
Come on the day of the prom. He brings a letter of declaration for the girl he loves, the most popular girl in high school, but he is humiliated in front of all. Students and teachers make fun of him, without exceptions. Mad with rage, he will shut himself up in an empty classroom and set the school on fire.
Everyone is doing well, but Peter is declared dead, because he has never been found. In truth, he came out of the building, dragging himself toward the forest. The accident seriously injured him, causing him blindness at one eye and disfigurement of the face, in addition to burns on his entire body, but it also left him alone. Neither the firemen or the police came to fetch him, no one rescued him.
The years passed, he heal himself in a storage cabin that he discovered by chance in the great forest that borders the city, learning to use his ears as his eyes.
Eventually, the city's habitants slowly began to disappear, as he kidnapped, tortured, interrogated by gestures and murdered to obtain information. He discovers that not only was there no investigation into his disappearance, but that there was no burial either. His parents never claimed his body, and his sister does not even know about his existence.
He learns that his sister was removed from the family because of the violence of their father and adopted by another family. His father was imprisoned and released for good behavior. His mother ended up dying from drinking too much. As for his little sister, she follows in the footsteps of her adoptive father, the sheriff of the city, and want to enter the police.
He slips into a field, empties the head of a scarecrow found there, and covers his face with the tulle bag belonging to the scarecrow. Then heading for the city, he finds the way back to his house where he murders his father before going to hang him instead of the scarecrow.
He is decided that this time, no one ever forgets him!Weapon: A chain, at the end of which is a hook
Capacity: He has a longer reach. With L2, he can draw the survivors to him with his chain.
perks:
I feel your presence:
When a survivor looks directly at the killer at a certain distance, the killer receives a hearing clue in the direction of the victim. The distance from which the survivor's gaze can be detected increases by level.
"I know he's here ..." = CeriseBe my eyes:
The entity offers a new view to the killer. Survivors who are at a certain distance from a hook on the map are made visible to the killer by their auras. The area of effect increases by level.
"Do you think he sees us? »= CeriseForget it :
Once the survivor hung, all other survivors are unable to see his aura beyond a certain distance. The distance is increased by level.
" Help ! Why no one come ?! »= Cerisemomento: Gives a blow that wraps the chain around the survivor's throat. Once the survivor is within range, he pulls him by the hair to raise his head, catches the hook of his chain and pushes him in the throat.
Map: Peter's hometown, Evertone
The small town surrounded by a large redwood forest. The map includes a small part of the city and part of the forest with the hut where Peter takes refuge.Peter has a burned skin, like Freddy Krueger, but he have hairs. He wear the head of the scarecrow like a mask and his chain is wrapped around his arm, and hangs to the ground, making a noise as he moves forward. I would make the survivor who come with him, his sister, Cerise They are both American, but originally from Martinique.
(well... I have published the book in english, if you're interested...
https://www.bookelis.com/thriller/34041-The-scarecrow.html )Post edited by VickyVoorhees on0 -
here is the sister of Peter !
cerise Harper - Survivor
Perks:
Hysteria:
You and other nearby survivors get speed improvements in repair, healing, and sabotage when the killer is close to you.
" Quick ! He is almost there! "Panic :
When pursued by the killer, your aura is revealed to other players.
" Help ! "Never ! :
When you are on the killer's shoulder, you struggle more easily. On the hook, your chances of escape increase by 1% (increases by level)
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Uh... Hi ! I have another idea/fan concept... sorry for borrowed you o_o
It's from my first scifi bookchapitre title : Holy Madness
(don't have other ideas for the title)Ryane Silver - survivor
**Story : **
Born in 2472, Ryane Silver has not gone well in life. He was born in a slum city, east of the capital of the new Europe, where he lives with his mother, his father, and his 7 older brothers and sisters. He is the last of the siblings. One fine day, his older brother decides to leave the family cocoon to look for a job more actively, and above all, to remove a useless mouth to feed. All children leave as soon as they turn 16, each in turn, but they never come back ...
Come Ryane's turn. His parents are depressed. Ryane did not understand it, but they do not care about the money, they just want the return of their children. The young man, full of hope, walks the streets, enters each store, each administrative building, to no avail. When winter arrives, he finds himself in the street, without money, without food, and collapses in the snow. He thinks of dying, without being able to see his family again, at the age of 16.
That's when a man will reach out to him. With promises of employment and even housing, he takes him to an old abandoned mine where a secret laboratory has been set up. The first days are radiant, but Ryane discovers that he is only a guinea pig. Scientists are trying to create bionic and totally obedient super-soldiers out of humans deemed useless and replaceable. Ryane is only half changed, he kept control of his body, unlike the others who went crazy and began to kill the staff of the laboratory. Ryane is then locked in this mine. His new body allows him to survive without the need to drink or eat, and prevents him from dying of old age. Stuck, desperate, as he thinks he's going crazy through confinement, he hears a murmur.
Going down the halls, he follows, without realizing it, strange shapes, like branches of trees. By turning at a corner of a gallery, he suddenly finds himself outside, in a dark forest, near a campfire ... he is outside, but he is not free ... not yet.Perks:
Sixth Sense :
When the survivor profane a totem, the detector implanted in his eye reveals the aura of a second totem, the closest. If he desecrates the spell totem, he will also see the killer's aura for 5 seconds.
"It's not so bad to be half-machine. »= RyaneWhere was he going? :
The fast movements of the survivor are difficult to follow. When the survivor performs a stunt on a pallet or through a window, the sound and visual signal received by the killer will be delayed by 1 second (increases by levels), incorrectly placing the survivor's place and disorienting the killer.
"Try to catch me a little! »= RyaneNuisance :
If the survivor is the killer's obsession, succeeding in stunning the killer will make one of the killer's benefits be disabled. This can be repeated up to three times, potentially resulting in the disabling of all killer benefits. Sacrificing or killing the obsession will restore the killer's benefits.
"I will not let anyone die! »= RyaneDorian Croyle - Killer
Killer Name: The Immortal
Story :
Dorian Croyle was born in 2468 on Mother Earth. His parents are corrupt and hypocritical billionaires, and he grows up while learning that some lives are worth more than others, especially his own. Passing his childhood, then his adolescence to hear the praises of his beauty and his grace, although he is a boy, he ends up being persuaded himself and plays with to get what he wants. Genius in almost every field, he is interested in science and robotics. He creates his own company that offers every day new robotic inventions made to make life easier for citizens, especially for the richest.
In a short time, he triples, even more, the fortune of his parents, but something much more important in his eyes bother him: time. He is still young, but he refuses to grow old. He begins to do extensive research on a way to keep his beauty out of time. Under cover of military research, he manages to lead the government as he wishes and is offered sites to install secret laboratories to perform human experiments.
Little by little, he begins to despise other humans. He is too different, too beautiful, compared to others, and a new idea comes to him. Succeeding in obtaining the immortality he desired, he has the idea of renewal. He must destroy this impure humanity and create a new one in his image. He would become a god.
During the preparations of his ship to leave the planet that he intends to annihilate, a whisper draws him towards the woods. He enters it without suspicion, and walks for hours. He then realizes that he is no longer in this world. That something more powerful, older, chose him.A smile stretches his lips. His purge would begin here ...
Weapon: He has a laser dagger in his right hand, and a laser gun in the left.
Ability: Dorian can shoot with his laser gun, but the laser gun needs to recharge.
**perks **:
You're mine:
The killer becomes obsessed with a survivor and is not afraid to take risks so that this survivor belongs to him and just him. When the obsession is down, the killer can try to kill the obsession with his own hands without having to hook it first. There is a risk that the attempt will succeed, but if it does not, there will be consequences for desobey the entity. The chances of success increase by level. At the first level, a failed attempt will give the survivors a slight increase in their speed of repair. At the second level, a failed attempt will additionally apply an increase in the area of successful skill tests by 25%. At the third level, a failed attempt will activate the least complete generator of the map at 100%. A failed attempt will also remove the obsession to the wounded state and allow him to escape. There can only be one obsession per match.
"This human ... I want it! = DorianMachinery skills:
The killer knows the machinery and knows where to hit to break the generators, leaving them more damaged and dangerous to repair. The first skill test that a survivor encounters after starting on a previously broken generator is more and more difficult by level and, in the event of failure, the explosion will put the survivor in the injured state if it does not already done (only if he fail at the first test). The effects of this benefit can not put a survivor on critical state.
"I have a little surprise for you ..." = DorianIncapable! :
Hanging up survivors leaves them disabled. When a survivor is suspended for the first time, one of his benefits becomes invalid for the remainder of the match. If he is hung a second time, another of his benefits is also disabled. At the first level, this advantage only concerns the first two survivors hooked during the match. At the second level, this advantage can affect the first three hooked survivors. At the third level, this advantage can affect the four hooked survivors.
"You will never be able to beat me! = Dorian** momento** : Dorian kicks to return the survivor on the back. He puts his foot on the torso of the survivor to prevent him from moving and points his pistol on his head, before shooting.
Map: The mining laboratory
The old cuprite mines were requisitioned a long time ago to make a laboratory on the last two basements. The map covers only one basement, the doors overlook the elevator and the stairs. The place looks like an abandoned laboratory. In several places, there are half-human corpses (arms or legs mechanical etc.) and also decapitated soldiers and scientists, disemboweled or cut in half. Most "operating" rooms have their walls covered with blood, especially on the tables. Doors are smashed and a large majority of furniture. At times, screams are heard, or circular saws / chainsaws sounds or other objects, also footsteps, all seeming to come from the upper floor.(the book is here, now in english : https://www.bookelis.com/science-fiction/34278-B3-Robotic.html )
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Hey, I'm currently writing a new horror novel, and I had fun with my characters :)
It's always just for fun! It is why I allowed myself to imagine perks "a little" cheated for some or just weird ;)
I didn't bother making false dbd captures. I just show you my Malone made on MMD and Barbara as I did in sims 4, with a small image of the first perk of Barbara XD
Bloody Revenge
Malone Wayke - Killer
Killer name: don't have any ideas ^^"
Story : Brilliant and sporty, were the two words that described Malone Wayke. A teenager like others, captain of the rugby team, with a well-hidden secret: his attraction to boys. Neither his father nor his comrades were aware of it. Only his best friend knew, and kept his secret.
But secrets are never more secrets. When his team learned that he was gay, he was beaten up. Broken arms and legs, fractured ribs, body covered with bruises, they ended up throwing him on the rails. His arms and legs were then crushed and cut. Not proud of their crime, the team quickly hid his body, burying him far in the forest. But Malone still felt alive.
His body again awakened by an unknown force, he killed his comrades one by one. The last one finally dead, the dislocated ghost of Malone sank into the woods for no other purpose. And the more he advanced, the denser the forest, the mist rose. He heard a whisper promising to help him.
Why settle for such a weak revenge when there are still so many lives to take? After all, he had to find out who had spread his secret.
Weapon: his arm
Ability: He can "send" an arm away. But can't reuse it until it come back. If the sent arm crosses a survivor, it will catch it and bring it to the killer.
Perks:
Knock Knock :
No one escapes a ghost. If a survivor is hiding in a locker within 10 meters of the killer, the killer will receive an audio signal. The radius increases by offset.
"There is no point in hiding! "= Barbara
Broken Heart :
When you sacrifice or kill a survivor, everyone else starts to cry, revealing their position. You can hear them on a 10 meter radius, and the crying lasts a few seconds. The radius increases by offset.
"I know where you are. "= Malone
Make your choice :
When this perk is activated, and a survivor is hooked, the other survivors will then have to make a choice. If they finish a generator while the survivor is hooked, then the entity will appear immediately. If they decide to save the survivor, all of the unfinished generators will drop to zero.
" I do not know what to do ! "= Barbara
Momento:
Malone just watches, as his arms break the 4 limbs of the survivor before finally breaking his neck.
Barbara Moonlake - Survivor
Story: Barbara was the slightly plump and geeky girl that everyone laughed at. Skin stained with vitiligo, eyes too weak without glasses, teeth open, she was often the target of her comrades. She only spent time with her best friend, Malone Wayke. She jealously guarded his secret to protect him.
When Malone went missing, she used all her strength to try to find him, but without success.
As she entered the woods to continue her research, she got lost in the mist. A dark whisper accused her. She was guilty. She was the only one who knew. It could only be her.
Barbara was sure she would find Malone, but did he really want her to find him?
Perks:
Show some love:
When you are close enough to the killer press [key name] to hug him. This will temporarily immobilize him to allow the escape of your crew.
The duration of the immobilization increases by level
"I never wanted to hurt you" = Barbara
Good view:
This ability allows you to spot the aura of objects on the ground within at 5 meter radius, increasing in level.
" Believe me ! It's right there! "= Barbara
Even in death:
Your sacrifice is not in vain. When you die, the other survivors gain a percentage (increasing by level) of additional speed in healing, sabotage and repair. You also gain more blood points in selflessness.
"Even if I'm not there, I have to help them!" "= Barbara
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