Chapter Concept - Cursed, cursed creator! Why did I live?

SolidSameezy

Hey DBD community ,

I love this game and have enjoyed playing it for the last year! I am keen to give back to the community and recently, I came up with a Killer concept, inspired by the classic Frankenstein's Monster. I've written out the details below and it would be great to get your feedback! Thanks everyone

The Creature

Name: None
Gender: None (Looks predominantly male / male voice)
Ethnicity: None
Realm: Léry’s Memorial Institute
Power: Dead Eyes / Bear Down Upon
Weapon: Dead Hand
Speed: 115% | 4.6m/s
Alt. Speed : 95% | 3.8m/s (1 sec Wind-up), 150% | 6m/s

Background:

A creature that was not born, but made of the organs, muscles, bones, skins of countless dead bodies and given new life by a crazed doctor, consumed with his experiments to cheat death. Forcibly awoken from what was meant to be an eternal rest, the creature loathes its creator for bringing them into a world that is horrified by the very sight of the wretched flesh golem.

The Creature has relentlessly pursued their creator, across continents and from pole to pole, looking to exact its bloody revenge and killing many others in its rampage. Such intense hatred for life attracted the attention of The Entity, which enticed The Creature into its domain with the promise of endless slaughter and to deliver it the man that they had searched for all this time.

Power - Dead Eyes (Passive) / Bear Down Upon (Active)

Dead Eyes (Passive): The creature is an abomination of flesh and undeath that puts fear in the hearts of all those that are unfortunate enough to look at it. Your gaze will build up terror in their mind and soul, causing panic as they fear your unstoppable approach.

When a survivor looks in the direction of The Creature and is unobscured by terrain, Terror starts to stack. Terror stacks do not diminish while in a chase and will only disappear if the Survivor wins the chase or The Creature hits the Survivor. At 6 stacks (6 seconds), the Survivor will suffer from the Confusion Status, which will last for 2 seconds. There is a 2 second cooldown after a Survivor has been affected before Terror can begin to stack again.

Note: ‘Confusion’ is status effect that inverts camera and movement controls for the duration of the effect.

Bear Down Upon (Active). After a 1 sec wind up, in which The Creature moves at reduced speed, it will sprint towards its target with arms outstretched, with slightly reduced control over manoeuvrability. Survivor’s unfortunate enough to be in the path of The Creature will be picked up off their feet and forced into a chokehold. The Creature will attempt to suffocate the Survivor and if is successful will put The Survivor straight into the dying state.

Standardly, it takes 8 seconds to choke out a Survivor and The Creature can still move at 33% | 1.32 m/s. Survivors can use Decisive Strike to break out of the chokehold, flashlight and pallet saves will also break the grasp, putting the Survivor into the injured state.
Cancelling the power early, reaching the maximum range or missing your target results in a 1 second cooldown. Cancelling the power before it has charged does not result in cooldown. Standard maximum range is 12 metres.

Weapon - Dead Hand:

The tremendous strength of The Creature and the cold, dead weight of its hands make for more than effective weapons, hitting as hard as a sledge hammer.

The Creature can not lunge attack.

Unique / Teachable Perks

Reanimated

Your victims can not get away from your relentless pursuit and the harder they run the easier it is for you to follow.

Gain stacks of Bloodlust 10/15/20% faster. Against your obsession, gain stacks 15/20/25% faster.

“It will chase you to the ends of the earth, without rest. There is no escape from this monster”
Doctor’s Diary

Into The Pit

As your victims come closer to death, anticipation and excitement grows as you come nearer to taking another life.

Hooking a Survivor grants Haste effect for the duration of the time a Survivor is on a hook.

1 Survivor on hook. 2%
2 Survivors on hook. 3%
3 Survivors on hook. 4%

Haste will last for 30/45/60 seconds after a Survivor is unhooked. If the Survivor is sacrificed the Haste effect becomes permanent (Tier 3 only.)

“It is obsessed with death and creates nothing but death in its wake”
Doctor’s Diary

Indestructible

Even the boldest are afraid to confront you and will not likely cross paths with you if they can avoid it.

Survivor’s not in a chase that are within 12/18/24 metres of you are affected with maximum terror radius and can not discern the direction of the heartbeat.

“As I close my eyes to sleep, I hear The Creature all around me and see it’s eyes burning into my mind and soul”
Doctor’s Diary

Add Ons

Name: Vagrant’s Left Eye
Rarity: Common
Description: The brown eye of a common beggar, with a pupil that is a little dilated from years of drug abuse.
Action: Slightly decreases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: Teacher’s Right Eye
Rarity: Common
Description: The brown eye of an old school teacher, features a small pupil that shows a little stress from years of focus.
Action: Slightly increase the duration of terror. Moderately increases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: Mismatched Labourer Hands
Rarity: Common
Description: A pair of hands taken from two different corpses. Both show some signs of work and labour.
Action: Slightly decreases the chokehold duration.

Name: Pig’s Blood
Rarity: Common
Description: The blood of a sow flows through your veins, impure and unclean.
Action: Slightly increases the maximum range of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Slightly increases maximum speed of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Slightly increases cooldown.

Name: Mother’s Left Eye
Rarity: Uncommon
Description: A blue eye taken from a once beautiful woman, that adored her children.
Action: Moderately decreases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: Architect’s Right Eye
Rarity: Uncommon
Description: A blue eye taken from an architect, known for his good attention to detail.
Action: Moderately increase the duration of terror. Considerably increases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: New Knee Joints
Rarity: Uncommon
Description: A brand new pair of knee joints to help with articulation and suppleness
Action: Slightly decreases charge time of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Slightly increases movement speed while performing a chokehold.

Name: Carpenter’s Hands
Rarity: Uncommon
Description: Hands that once belonged to a carpenter, accustomed to physical work and hard labour.
Action: Moderately decreases the chokehold duration.

Name: Cow’s Blood
Rarity: Uncommon
Description: The blood of a newborn calf flows through your vein, sticky and thick.
Action: Moderately increases the maximum range of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Moderately increases maximum speed of ‘Bear Down Upon’ Moderately increases cooldown.

Name: Left Eye Of A Child
Rarity: Rare
Description: The green eye of an orphan, with a large pupil wide with the fear the child felt before their demise.
Action: Considerably decreases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: Right Eye Of A Surgeon
Rarity: Rare
Description: The green eye of a surgeon, that had incredible focus in life.
Action: Considerably increase the duration of terror. Tremendously increases the time it takes to stack maximum Terror.

Name: Hands of a madman
Rarity: Rare
Description: Hands taken from a convict, executed for strangling a number of victims.
Action: Considerably decreases the chokehold duration.

Name: Virgin’s Blood
Rare: Rare
Description: You are made with the blood of a pure virgin, filling you with vigor and vitality.
Action: Considerably increases the maximum range of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Considerably increases maximum speed of ‘Bear Down Upon’. Considerably increases cooldown.

Name: Iridescent Eyes
Rarity: Ultra Rare
Description: A glass-like pair of perfect eyes, moulded from The Fog itself. They are warm and reverberating with The Entity's power.
Action: Reveals the auras of any survivor looking at you for 3 seconds, even when behind terrain. Can only proc after first filling 1 survivor with Terror.

Name: Hands Of The Hanged Man
Rarity: Ultra Rare
Description: Hands taken from a hanged man that wrongly received the death penalty for a crime they did not commit. They twitch with hatred and rage at the wrongdoing.
Action: Grants the ability to perform instant down chokehold. Considerably reduces steering. Slightly increases charge time of ‘Bear Down Upon’.

Note: No Add-Ons stack for The Creature